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Lauren's One Stop Critique Shop
Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:28 pm
*blows dust of thread*
Lauren's back in the reviewing business!
ask me to review:
Novels! (I love following novels, and I'll catch up on chapters if you're far in)
Action and Adventure Fiction
ask me to review (though I am much less experienced in):
FanFiction (If I'm not familair with the topic, I'll be less of a help.)
ask me to review (because I know very little about):
Drawings/paintings/computer generated art
The way it works is you post a link in the thread and I'll get on to reviewing as soon as possible! If I follow your novel, further notification of updates can be done via PM rather than posting here.
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Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:44 pm
Let me know if this is a good story:
Too bad we don't live to experinece death
Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:25 pm
Here's a fantasy story. This is Ch2, but if you want to read the others they should be under the related posts with it.
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace.
-Air Force Mission Statement-
Service Before Self
Excellence In All We Do
~Air Force Core Values~
Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:25 pm
Hey Lauren, do you do romantic fiction? If so, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. Here are the links:
Thanks so much!
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:33 am
I've got loads of free time recently. Come on with the review requests
Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:49 pm
. The Janitors - Prologue. COuld you please review.
TheNewHero coincidentally would review your work as well. Contact TheNewHero, help him learn the art of reviewing. Let him offer his fiction based mind to you poems and or fiction.
Tue Jun 08, 2010 7:12 pm
I'm opening up again for requests!
Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:57 am
Hey, just saw that you had a thread on here. Cool
Anyway, chapter four is upp, would love a review whenever you can get the chance
thanks a million!
Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:41 am
Very much appreciated if you would take the time to review an excerpt from my novel,
. It’s a realistic fantasy with an apocalyptic feel.
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you!
-"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
This awesome post bought to you by me.
Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:21 pm
Just got home from vacation, I'll get to your requests as soon as possible Attolia and Maddy!
Tue Jul 06, 2010 3:46 am
You say novels. Does that mean exclusively novels? If not, here is a short that I would very much appreciate a review on. Thank you for your time, it is much appreciated. MVP
My Commaful Page
Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:13 pm
Here is the second chapter of a novel I'm writing.
A note is that you DO NOT need to read the first chapter because every chapter it will switch between two characters. Thus this chapter is completely unrelated, as of now, to the first chapter. If you plan on reading future chapters than it will make much more sense if you read the first one.
"If the king doesn't lead, how can he expect his subordinates to follow?"
Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:35 am
Could you review this for me? Thanks!
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:09 pm
Hey Lauren! *waves* Think you could review this for me please and thank you?
Just another quack spouting
"If I win, I'm a
. If I lose, then I'm
. That's the way history is written."
Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:09 pm
I'm back open for business! Request away!
Properly trained, a man can be dog's best friend.
— Corey Ford
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