*Stumbles into thread* "What am I going to do with all this pink elephant food?"
Oh, hello Shearwater.
Would you take a look at this when your not too busy? It's (general) Fantasy, no title yet though (can't think of one).
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It's the first chapter of the book I've been working on recently. (Split in two parts because is kind of long - over 4,000 words) This is the "revised edition" of Ch. 1. But I'm looking for more feedback to make it even better
I know there are other's ahead of me, so I will be patient and wait.
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