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Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:43 am
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VampireSenshi says...



Hey Shear!!!

When you have the time please :D

- work.php?id=96361
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Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:34 am
Rydia says...



Title: A Hero's Day Off
Genre: Narrative Poetry/ Satire
Link: work.php?id=96490

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Tue Jul 17, 2012 10:02 pm
DudeMcGuy says...



Hi Shearwater,

Sorry to just add to the pile, but you said to let you know when my story continued. So here is the latest chapter:
work.php?id=96478
work.php?id=96479

From the looks of your thread you're gonna be pretty busy for a while!
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Fri Aug 03, 2012 5:01 pm
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wordsandwishes says...



Hi there!
I was wondering if you could review one of my poems?
Title: shh...Listen
Genre: Other
Link: work.php?id=96182
Hope you like it :D

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Sat Aug 04, 2012 5:32 am
ThornOfTheRose says...



work.php?id=96777 The crash- short story- general. Thankyou so much!
  





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Tue Aug 07, 2012 6:04 am
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Sionarama says...



I would just like to thank you for the great review! It was informative that held suggestions and appreciations in my work. I wanted to let you know I really appreciated it.
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Sat Jan 05, 2013 5:23 pm
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Shearwater says...



*Shameful bump*

Free to review! =]
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Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:40 pm
AliceDreams says...



Can I ask for a review? Pretty please? I hope its not too much...
Chapter 1- work.php?id=98795
Chapter 2- work.php?id=98879

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Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:05 pm
Shearwater says...



Done. Thank you. :]
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Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:40 am
Twit says...



Hey Shears!

Please be vitriolic.

Title: Clockwork Hearts
Genre: Uh...steampunk? Kinda?
Link: work.php?id=98920
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Fri Jan 11, 2013 10:28 am
*coco says...



Hey, pink, Coco here! It's been a while, huh? *wonders if you still remember me*

Anyway, I'd love a review of a new novel I'm working on. I need to know if it's going to be worth writing more chapters on.

Take as long as you need :D

Title: Dark Lies
Genre: Mystery/suspense
Link: work.php?id=98967
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Fri Jan 11, 2013 5:06 pm
Shearwater says...



Done with both! Thanks for the delicious meals, guys. ;)
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Sat Jan 12, 2013 1:34 am
marivisan says...



Hey Shearwater! How are you?
Wanna check my short story?
Thanks!

work.php?id=98971

work.php?id=98971
  





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Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:24 pm
kayfortnight says...



Could you please review my poem The Court of Flame?

work.php?id=99042
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 3:24 pm
CourtlynJ says...



If you'd take a look at this, I'd be much obliged! It's just a short intro thing I did for Creative Writing work.php?id=99054 Thanks a million! :)
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