Young Writers Society

Hey girl!

I want my friend to get into this web site, but her work isn't being reviewed. Would you mind doing it for me?

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Captain.classy-Done!

Sorry took a little long. I've been busy but I'm back now so I'll be happy to take any other requests

Thanks so much Pink!

No problem.
Anyone else??

I'd appreciate it if you could check out my fantasy novel. It's the Assassin's Redemption. Here's a link:
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Thanks

Hi! Could you review part twelve of my story in other fiction? Sorry If you don't understand what's happening, I just want a grammar, etc. review.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58494.html

Thanks! And I don't mind harshness!

--Dreamy

KanenRenoir: Done!
Dreamy115: Working on it

Hey pink! Coco here again, hope your well I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy. I'm kinda nervous to see what you make of it but fingers crossed you'll enjoy the chapter.
Thanks a million
*coco

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59246.html chapter 10.

Dreamy115-Done!
Coco-Done!

Yay!

'Ullo Pink
Fancy another look at one of my columns? I noticed you said you weren't sure how to review it, so just some feedback would be fab! Thankyou,
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This one's about ITV and British Broadcasting.
~Ben

Hey Pink. I have three chapters of my Fantasy novel, Eventide up on YWS (I think I posted the first chapter a good while ago, though) and never got the amount of reviews I would have liked. Would you mind looking at the first chapter? If you feel so inclined you can look at the next 2 chapters as well (chapter 2 is in two parts, by the way).

Here's the link
Chapter 1

Thanks!

-Lauren-

Ben-Done!

Lauren, I'll check your chapter now
I'll probably have your review done in a few days or so.

~Pink

Hey Pink,
I would like a review. It is called After Adonis and it's romantic fiction though it's also fantasy. Please help me. I'm going to write a second chapter to it so I need feedback for the second too... please go to:
p0at677901.html#p677901.
if you have any troubles just click on my name and look through my profile!

Hey could you do this? Thanks! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post684136.html#p684136

Sionarama-Done!
Lauren-Done!

Hey jasminebells, I'll be doing yours next