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Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:58 am
Yuriiko says...



Hey yo, dad! Whatssup?!

Will you please review this? Im'ma feed you with lots of chocolates and berries, yo!

Thank you!

Peace out!
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Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:12 pm
Kagi says...



Heya Pinky,

Haven't chatted in a while but I guess, I haven't been doing much.. Gah, :shock:

Here you go. I warn you,
It ain't pretty.
It may be horrible but that's what you're for right?

*Feeble mumble*
Right
Got YWS?

If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong. :P
  





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Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:47 pm
Shearwater says...



Yuriiko - topic does not exist.
Kagi - Done.

Thank you for requesting me! I'll be happy to take up more.
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:50 pm
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Tigersprite says...



Hey Pink! (How's the Penguin Club revival going?)

Can you review this, please? It's the continuation of the series of short stories I first posted on YWS--The Spirit Boy. I think you reviewed one part, but I don't expect you to remember and it's not necessary to. I just need an epic Pink-style review so that I can work on what needs to be changed. :D Thanks in advance!

Tiger
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:37 pm
Shearwater says...



TigerSprite-Done

Thank you for the request Tiger! I enjoyed your piece very much. ^^
I'll be happy to eat any more. =D
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:39 pm
ehte92 says...



Hello there, Pink.

Could you please review this poem for me?

Thank you.

*ehte*
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:19 pm
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Shearwater says...



ehte-Done!

Thanks for the request, guys!
I'll be happy to take on any more. =]
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Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:34 pm
Jpah says...



Can you review this chapter of my novel, its the prologue.

Title: The Butcher's Son: A Novella

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic79365.html
  





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Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:05 am
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Yuriiko says...



Hey! Here yah go. post845036.html#p845036
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Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:44 pm
Shearwater says...



Jpah- Done!
Yuriiko- Done!

Thanks for the request! ^___^
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Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:29 pm
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Sins says...



I've been in need of a Punk review for a while now, and now that I've posted a short story, I can request one! I mean, asking you to review my novel would be torture, so I don't. I'm just that nice. ;)

But anywaysssss, would you mind reviewing my rather depressing short story for me? topic79474.html I wrote it last night because that's just what I do at 1:00am.

Please and thank you!
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Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:35 pm
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TylynRae says...



Hey there =] I wrote this short story, titled Sinews, and I haven't had as many reviews on it as I would like. So if you could read it that would be fantastic =] Thanks! topic79478.html
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Tue Apr 19, 2011 3:17 pm
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Shearwater says...



Skins - Done
tydecker777 - Done

Thank you all for the requests!
I had fun reading them. ^^
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Wed Apr 27, 2011 11:27 pm
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Sunshine says...



Hey can you pretty please review my sister's art work? I realize I posted, but she doesn't wan't a file. So... please?

post853306.html#p853306
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Fri Apr 29, 2011 10:54 pm
Audrey says...



Hello!

I was wondering if you might be able to review this for me?

Thanks so much!

Audrey
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