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Sun Apr 08, 2012 9:40 am
Angelreader77 says...



I'd love it if you could review my poem, Just itself.

work.php?id=94427

Thanks a lot! :D
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Mon Apr 09, 2012 5:02 am
Ikerot says...



Title: A Beauty Never To Be Seen
Genre: Romance/Humor

Link: work.php?id=94422

:3
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Sun Apr 15, 2012 6:14 pm
Shearwater says...



All done!

Thank you all for feeding the pink elephant!
Keep the food coming!

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Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:12 am
Gg127 says...



Please review my New poem, The Ladybug (when you have time of course)! Thanks, Pink!


work.php?id=94622
  





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Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:27 pm
Ikerot says...



Yo, I just did some really frustrating review :D and I probably would like you to review a part of my story that I recently added in (description).

work.php?id=94631

It's scifi/fantasy. This is just part one because this is one heck of a long prologue. I don't know why, I was writing and suddenly it was like this.
I still need to fix the other parts =3=
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:56 am
Caesar says...



Hey, would you mind reviewing this?
work.php?id=94837
Thanks
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Sun Apr 22, 2012 11:12 pm
Swottielottie says...



Hello! This thread certainly is popular :D, I wonder why, eh? (The quality of reviews, obviously)
Could you review the first (and if you can, the second too) chapter of this:
work.php?id=94843 for me? It looks a bit 'Austen' at the moment but somehow it's going to be science fiction in a few chapters, honest.

Thank you!
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Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:34 am
VampireSenshi says...



If you have the time, I would love you to Review this latest work of mine! Thank You!!!

work.php?id=94731
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Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:56 am
lilymoore says...



If you're not too busy.
The Lottery Winner
It's just a short story/the intro to my game design project.
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Tue May 01, 2012 2:51 am
Shearwater says...



Thank you all for requesting reviews and feeding the ever hungry pink elephant!

I'm ready to take on more requests.
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Wed May 02, 2012 8:54 pm
MonoTheElderish says...



If it's to your taste, Could you Perhaps take a look at my Futuristic/Trench Warfare/Post-apocalyptic novel in progress. It's Rated 18+ for language and violence so, Just FYI. It's not excessive as far as I can tell, but it is there. work.php?id=94840

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Thu May 03, 2012 3:50 am
Omni says...



Hello, Shearwater, my name is omniyus, and I was wondering if you could review my work. It is a fanfiction of the Hunger Games, so if you don't know the story, than don't bother, but I have three chapters so far.

work.php?id=94885 Chapter 1

work.php?id=94934 Chapter 2

work.php?id=95026 Chapter 3

Thanks! :)
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Sat May 05, 2012 5:52 pm
Ikerot says...



This is an awkward request.

Can you review chapter 1 of From Where We Started (It changed from prologue to chapter) xD
I rewrote it.

work.php?id=94631

*you can see your own review*
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Sat May 12, 2012 1:01 pm
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Caesar says...



Hey Shear! I like your reviews... I'd appreciate if you'd review this work.php?id=95252
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Sat May 12, 2012 6:49 pm
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work.php?id=95000

Could you please review the first two chapters of my novel? Thanks!
  








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