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Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:25 pm
*coco says...



Hiya, Pink, Coco here! Remember me? :D

I've been kinda awol lately what with school and stuff, but I'm back in YWS world now. I've used the spare time that I now have in abundance to go back and completely revamp my whole story [well, when I say story I mean the 10 chapters that I already posted]. I'd be super dooper greatful if you could check out the changes I've made and give me your honest opinion on them. Take as long as you need though, no rush :)

Of Loss and Love: chapter 1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html

Thanks a bunch!

*coco
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Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:17 am
Shearwater says...



*Coco-Done!

Thanks for the request, I'll slowly review your next chapters :)
If there's one I missed, don't hesitate to post again lol

I'm open for reviews! Anyone?? :D
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Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:36 am
Shearwater says...



Anyone? I'm starving... haha
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Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:38 pm
Shearwater says...



Wow. So empty ;_;
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Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:07 am
pinkangel54123 says...



How do you feel about reviewing a Fantasy Novel? If you agree, the link is in my signature. And it's called Luna. Thanks in advance.
Want a heavenly review?

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Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:38 pm
Shearwater says...



Thanks for the request, I'm working on it right now :)
I'll update as I finish

Luna
Chapter 1.0:*Reviewed
Chapter 2.1:*Reviewed
Chapter 2.2:*Reviewed
Chapter 3.1: *Reviewed
Chapter 3.2: *Reviewed
Chapter 4: *Reviewed
Chapter 5: *Reviewed
Chapter 6.1: *Reviewed
Chapter 6.2: *Reviewed
Chapter 7: *Reviewed

~Pink
Last edited by Shearwater on Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:43 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:15 am
BondGirl007 says...



post753261.html#p753261

I want an extremely honest opinion, don't hold back. =]
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Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:53 pm
Shearwater says...



Bondgirl-Done!
Danie, I think I'll be done with all your chapters by tomorrow.

I still have a lot of time to spare, so if anyone would like a review, please do post :)
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Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:40 pm
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Shearwater says...



Okay, I'm all done with PinkAngel's novel so I'm ready to take more requests! :)
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Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:52 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hey Pink

Could you review this for me please?
It called Blood in the Sunrise.

Thanks very much!
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:24 pm
Shearwater says...



Pudin.junidf-Done!
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Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:25 am
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Shearwater says...



Anybody else? I'm freee~
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Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:48 pm
megsug says...



Pink,
I'm sorry but I don't know how to post a link. I'm technically dysfunctional.
I want you to review The Masquerader Chapter 2 in General Fiction Novels.
Sorry again, Megsug
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Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:44 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this short story for me? Thanks!

topic68033.html
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Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:02 am
Shearwater says...



Megsug-Done
Blackbird-done

Wow, I'm fast ;)
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