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Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:36 pm
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Shearwater says...



Mollytate: Done!

:D Alright, does anyone else need a review?
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Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:26 am
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pudin.junidf says...



Hey Pink!
Can you please review this for me?
Is called A demon sits behind me at school.
Les sanglots longs
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Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:20 pm
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Shearwater says...



Pudin-Done!

I still have time for more :)
Anyone else?
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Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:35 pm
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Pretty Crazy says...



Title: Adjusting to the Dark- Chapter 2
action/adventure fiction
topic56883.html

It's not very exciting I'm afraid. >.< I'm trying to edit it. :P
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Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:26 pm
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Shearwater says...



Pretty crazy- Done~

More more more :D
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Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:53 pm
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pudin.junidf says...



Hey Pink?!

Thanks for the last review!

Can you please review this? it's the edited version.

Thanks!
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

Verlaine
  





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Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:48 am
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Lava says...



Pink!

Well, here's mine : topic57103.html
Could you tell me how to draw the first one better. Any suggestion's appreciated. :)

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Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:33 pm
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Shearwater says...



Pudin-Done!
Lavabubblingout-Done!

:D
I'm ready for more so keep em' coming!
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Wed Jan 20, 2010 4:31 am
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Jas says...



Hi, would you mind reviewing this?

Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue

No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth.

Thanks! :)


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I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:24 pm
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Shearwater says...



jasminebells-Done!
:elephant:
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Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:28 pm
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BenFranks says...



Hey there!
I see you wrote that you may not review non-fiction! Well, I thought I'd have a go at asking any'oo -- worth a bash, eh? :)
Anyway! If you love humour or comedy or satirical writing have a trot through my column-based book extract, which I have the link for somewhere... *digs around bag*
Ah-ha!
Here y'are -> topic57293.html
Tear it apart if you like!
Thankies!
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Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:13 am
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Shearwater says...



BenFranks-Done!

:D
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:16 pm
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*coco says...



Hey pink, it's me again :D I really appreciated your review. I was quite nervous to write my next chapter because I realised I hadn't really put some drama in like you and a lot of my other reviewers mentioned, and I kinda felt quite pressurised to put some drama in. Anyway, It's been difficult but I've finally put up chapter 9, so I hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on whether it's enough, if it's not I may stop writing as it's difficult to keep readers interested in a long story. Anyway, thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56650.html chapter 8

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Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:22 pm
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BenFranks says...



'Ullo Pink!
Unfortunately, to your despair, I've come anlong with another request for a bit'a humourus non-fiction. (In a slightly different context than before). Okay, so this is a piece I wrote in December and it's part of the preface to my column-based rant of a book "Earth and It's contents"
Well, I'd ardently admire your thoughts of it. (Bit'a Pride and Prej language for you there! XD). Here's the link... *Takes off hat and pulls out a small piece of paper and attempts to write what is written*
topic57771.html
Woo-hoo!
Any'oo, enjoy what you can.
It's called: (E&iC) Dictionary [Part One]
Cheers! Ben.
  





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Wed Jan 27, 2010 12:08 am
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Shearwater says...



BenFranks-Done!
*Coco-Done!

Thanks for the request guys, keep em' coming :)
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