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Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]



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Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:31 pm
Shearwater says...



lilgreendots-Done!

Anyone else?
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Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:41 pm
Tigersprite says...



Hey, Pink! (I just realized I haven't talked to you for a while. Why is that? Alas, the problem shall soon be addressed on your wall.) I have entered yet another contest, and deadline passed or no I need some review. Some good reviews. Some great reviews. Some reviews bordering on, and then surpassing, epic. Some Pink-style reviews. :P

So to get to the point, can you please review this for me? Thanks in advance. :D
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:06 pm
Shearwater says...



Tigersprite-done!

8D
Kay, next?
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:13 pm
Button says...



Hey there, Pink! :D

Could you please take a look at this: topic75972.html ?
There's the other half of that chapter posted as well, though you don't have to look at it. Only if you're interested. :)

Thanks! :D
  





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 12:42 am
Shearwater says...



Persephoneia-Done!

:3 Thank you for the request! I'll be happy to take up any other. ^.^
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Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:29 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Dad!

Could you review the chapters from my latest novel? Don't review chapter-1's part two although you'll need to read it.


Here's the link for the two:
Turning the Tables(1.1)
Turning the Tables(1.3)

Please and thanks! :wink:

P.S. Is there anything you wanted reviewed? :wink:
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:25 am
OverEasy says...



If you have the time, I would really love a review on this.

Please and thank you in advance :)

Tiff
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:00 pm
Shearwater says...



Shru-Almost done.
OverEasy-Done!

Kay, shoot me more if you want. :3
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:12 pm
Sins says...



Feel my raaaaaash! wrath!

Hai.

You're, like, so totally cool, so I want to request a review. (Hey, that kinda rhymed.) I've finished editing A Shot of Arrogance, and then I thought I'd be all rebellious and post the new first chapter here on YWS. Basically, I'd appreciate it if you could review it for moi.

Link, bruv: topic77175.html

Please and thank you! ^^
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Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:50 am
XxMattxX says...



Can you please do me a favor and review my new entry?
topic77210.html
It's in " General Fiction " because YWS currently doesn't have a thriller genre.
I really appreciate it!
Thanks!
- Jojo
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Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:03 am
onceuponatim3xo says...



Hello!

Was wondering if you might review We All Are Birds.

If you could that would be absolutely fantastic!! Thanks,
-Once
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:46 pm
Shearwater says...



Skins-Done
Jojo-Done
Onceuponatim3xo: Declined due to many previous reviews.

I'm free if you need me. ^^
Last edited by Shearwater on Wed Mar 09, 2011 11:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:45 pm
ElDavido says...



Hey, Im rather new as you may be able to tell by the post count. I have two nearly finished chapters sitting about if you're bored. Its literary fiction. Its an in medias res opening so it may make less sense as two chapters standing on their own. But yeah if you're bored take a look.

topic77339.html
  





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Thu Mar 10, 2011 11:13 pm
Shearwater says...



ElDavido-Done!

Kay, kay, kay, I'm up for moar. :D :D
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Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:41 am
Shearwater says...



*shameless bump*
:c
Feed me, please.
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