z

Young Writers Society


Mo's Marvellous Reviews!



User avatar
78 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 8463
Reviews: 78
Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:55 am
pinkangel54123 says...



Hey Mo! I was wondering if you would critique something in Fantasy Fiction.
The link is in my signature and it's called Luna.
Uhhh....and it would be helpful if you read the first chapter as well as the second, but I only want a review on the second. (Although I wouldn't mind if you did both.)
Please?
-Danie
Want a heavenly review?

GENERATION 30: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:59 am
Mo. says...



Sure! I'll get right on it. :D
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:24 am
Mo. says...



Done, and done. Anyone else?
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
411 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 42428
Reviews: 411
Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:11 pm
BenFranks says...



Hello Mo.!

I don't know if you'll hesitate about this but my need of a review is for Non-Fiction.
Here's the link: topic57293.html

What's it about?
Well it's an extract from my column-based book Earth & It's Contents. The book's me ranting about my opinions of the least irratating things in the world on a nonsense backed up argument that's hopefully humourus.

This particular extract is on Indian Food.

Hope you enjoy it!
Ben.





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:06 am
Mo. says...



Done. :D Anyone else?
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
130 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 24514
Reviews: 130
Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:32 pm
*coco says...



Hey mo, it's me again :D Thanks so much for your reviews, I've taken on board all that you've said and have went back and re-written my previous chapters. I've also posted up chapter 8. Hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on the improvements that I've made on the other chapters. Thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56650.html chapter 8

*coco
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:59 pm
Mo. says...



Hi coco! I'd be delighted too! I've already read it (good job by the way), but I have to get off the computer now. I'll write your review in the morning. :D
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:41 am
Mo. says...



Sorry for the wait coco, I forgot about that... -.- But it's done now, I really liked it. :D

Anyone else want a review?
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
130 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 24514
Reviews: 130
Tue Feb 23, 2010 1:27 pm
*coco says...



Hey mo! Coco here again, hope your well :D I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy.
Thanks a million
*coco

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59246.html chapter 10.
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:46 am
Mo. says...



Done. :D 'Twas nice coco.

Anyone else that would like a review?
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
29 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 5037
Reviews: 29
Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:08 pm
JSPike says...



Hi Mo. Can you review this please? :D

Evil Knows No Limits

It's historical fiction, but I'm not bothered about the historical part! Tear it apart if you want, I don't mind.

Thanks,

JSPike
Recognizing and rewarding writing talent: RW Competitions

Request reviews here: Requests

" All that is necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing "
-- Edmund Burke





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Mon Mar 15, 2010 11:07 pm
Mo. says...



Done. :D SOrry it took me so long to get to you, but it's done now. :D
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Mon Mar 15, 2010 11:10 pm
Mo. says...



Okay, any else want a review? I don't bite, and I promise I'll check A LOT more often, so you wont have to wait. :D
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





User avatar
553 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 58538
Reviews: 553
Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:05 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hi I want a review for my story. Here's the link:A Criminal's Heart
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





User avatar
113 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11393
Reviews: 113
Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:03 pm
Mo. says...



Hey there shubhiloves2write, I'm so sorry I haven't gotten to your story yet, and I don't think I will review it, seeing as it already has so many - I'd just be repeating what everybody else has already said.

Sorry. :(

PM me if you really want me to review, and I will, but at the moment, you've already gotten so many, that it seems my review wouldn't really be anything new to you.

Anyway, good luck, and keep writing. :D





~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

On a new note, would anyone else like a review? =]
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha








Defeat has its lessons as well as victory.
— Pat Buchanan