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Tue Nov 10, 2009 12:13 am
xLogan says...



*If you're category that your story is in or whatever you want me to review is in the, I don't want to review part you can just ask me and I will take it into consideration!*

Age: 13 - mentally I am much more older :smt001.

What genre I would want to critique:
• Action/Adventure
• Romantic Fiction
• Sci-Fi
• Fantasy
• Art & Photography


What genre I would not mind critiquing:
• Historical
• Other Fiction
• & some Non-Fiction
• Any type of poetry
• Scripts


What genre I do not want to critique:
• FanFiction
• Lyrics
• Anything rated R+
• Anything that was not listed above.


Include a short summary of how your critiques are organized:
I'll read the story about two times - the first time I read it, I look for grammar and spelling mistakes and try to get interested and such. The second time - I skim through looking to see if I missed any. After pointing out all the errors and my nit picks, I tell you what it needs improvement on and suggestions. Last but not least, I give you my personal opinion on it and sometimes a rating (5/5 or 10/10).

The length of my reviews:
Depends on the length and how well written the story is - some are short and others are really long! I always put all of my effort into reviewing stories for people like you!

Just leave your story's (or whatever it is) link, & what category it is in.

Oh, and please say THANKS when I'm done; not that I need it but it makes me feel more welcomed and I'm using my time to do something for you! :smt003
Last edited by xLogan on Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:54 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Tue Nov 10, 2009 1:49 am
lizzychicorock says...



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THANK YOU!:)
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Tue Nov 10, 2009 2:48 am
xLogan says...



No problema! Done, nice story. :D
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Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:06 am
Young gun says...



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Thank you.
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Tue Nov 10, 2009 11:43 pm
xLogan says...



Done, no problem.
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Thu Nov 12, 2009 1:50 am
xLogan says...



Come on people, I need some more stories to review! :P
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Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:34 am
infinite reality says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54392.html

What i would like to know:

Did this make you feel any emotion?
Where the characters believable?
Is this a good writing level to be at for a 14 year old?
Did it make you want to read more?

thanks a lot, if you want something reviewed, pm me.
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Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:36 am
wonderingkate says...



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It's fantasy fiction...consider it?

Gigantic, colossal, huge, thank you.
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Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:49 am
xLogan says...



IR > done, and no problem. :)

Kate > done, you're welcome! :)

I enjoyed both of the stories.
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Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:16 pm
xLogan says...



Anymore takers? :)
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Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:02 pm
imapoemperson says...



Here's my story!

I want to know how well developed my characters are
Is the scenario realistic?
And... Does it make you want to read more

Anything else that you can find will be great!

Thanks so much!

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Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:27 pm
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Poem > done, and no worries! Excellent story. :)
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Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:48 am
xLogan says...



I need some more takers. :)
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Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:23 am
xLogan says...



Come on people! :P
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Thu Nov 19, 2009 7:30 pm
wonderingkate says...



Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing my last story. Sorry I haven't sent the next chapter to you, it's been on hold. xD

This is romantic fiction, which I would be very pleased if you reviewed this one too.

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Another gigantic, colossal, huge thank you.
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