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Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:55 pm
PatriciaTina says...



Hey! I was just wondering if anybody would like me to review their work... I will basically review everything, but I will just say for starters that I might not be able to review your story right away. (Because of school. :x) Please read the guidelines first though.

What I will most definitely review!

~ Almost any type of fiction
~ Scripts
~ Anything rated PG-13 and lower

What I might review!

~Poetry/Lyrics (I'm really not that good at this, but I will try if you really want me to! You might not get that good of a review, though! :lol:
~ Same goes with fan-fiction. Remember that I haven't read every single book, seen every movie, or watched every TV show. I'll try, but the review might not be that good. ;)

What I would really rather not review!

~ Anything above PG-13 (Eg. anything with graphic sex/language/violence etc.)

Anyways. That's about it! If I think of anything else I need to add, I will. :D Post away!

~ Trish
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:33 am
empressoftheuniverse says...



It's not on the website yet, but...
I was wondering if I could get a raincheck I have a (very not scary and probably pg rated)
horror story that I need to tear apart before posting.
But I'll add the link soon.
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Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:48 am
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Sounds good. Just post a link when you get it up and I'll be all over it! I can't wait to read this! :wink:

~ Trish
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler! :
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson





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Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:01 pm
PatriciaTina says...



Anyone got something? Come on, I need stuff to review! :D

~ Trish :smt006
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler! :
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson





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Thu Oct 22, 2009 9:27 pm
Pretty Crazy says...



OK I haven't been getting any reviews for this so. . .
topic53725.html
Please tell me what you really think about it.
Thanks. :wink:
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Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:39 am
PatriciaTina says...



Pretty Crazy: Done! :D

Come on, people! More! :D

~ Trish :smt006
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler! :
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson





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Sat Oct 24, 2009 6:01 pm
AudreyAlice says...



I would love a review! I have only got one so far, and it wasn't very long. Just letting you know...I really love nits-picks! Here is the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53879.html

Also, when you read it, if something does not make sense, if you could point it out I would really appreciate it! :D

Audrey





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Audrey: done!

Anyone else? Come on people! I need more! :lol:

~ Trish :smt006

P.S. Aqua, I'm not sure what happened to your post. Do you still want a review on your story?
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler! :
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson





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Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:32 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hi Trish!!

Can you please review this for me? Is the first part of my story called Bye For Now.

post615795.html#p615795
thanks for your help.
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Mon Oct 26, 2009 3:49 am
PatriciaTina says...



Pudin: done! (finally! :lol:)

Anyone else? Come on, I need more! :D

~ Trish :smt006
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler! :
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson





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Thu Oct 29, 2009 1:58 am
pudin.junidf says...



hey Trish!

this is the second part of my story.
topic54012.html
can you pease review it?

thanks for the help.
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Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:15 am
youreit says...



Hey, can you review this for me? I just rewrote it completely and I need reviews before I write the next chapter. Thanks!
-youreit

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Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:43 am
Young gun says...



Could you help me out with this one by giving your review:

topic53783.html

Thanks.
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Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:05 am
PatriciaTina says...



Pudin - Done!

Youreit - Done!

Young gun - Done!

As I said in your reviews, I am so so so so so sorry that it took so long. I hope that the next requests won't take as long, but because of NaNoWriMo, I can't ensure that your review will get done right away. But I can ensure that it will get done ASAP.

Again, I'm sorry!

But since I'm done those three, is there anybody else? Come on, people!

~ Trish :smt006

P.S. For all future requests, please tell me if you want me to nit-pick everything, or just the extremely important things. Thanks!
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler! :
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson





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Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:51 am
Shearwater says...



Hi, could you help me out with this one?
I think I need some nit-picks =]
topic54098.html
Thanks!

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