Title: Advent Children; Death of a Major Player (Part1/2) Link: (Below) Genre: Action/Adventure Fiction Points of Interest: Spelling, grammar, etc. The usual. Current Parts/Chapters:
Hi, my story's been up for a week but not getting much attention... not sure if I'm just being impatient or not, but would you mind reviewing it? It's fantasy, the first chapter of what might be a book. Whenever you have time, no rush.
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Hey. I would like to think I'm almost finished on this piece, but when you read your own writing you miss things . So just if you get the time please review
It includes the same piece as before (You would remember it as The Absence of Wind, but I have renamed it Where Shadow Steps), with a few very minor changes so don't worry about doing that bit. (Which is now Chapter 1 not the prologue)So really just the new Prologue and Chapter 2.
We shall not cease from exploration, and the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we started and know the place for the first time. — T.S. Eliot
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