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Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:52 pm
AquaMarine says...



You want a review? I'll do it.

That's it, really.

~Amy
Last edited by AquaMarine on Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:32 pm, edited 10 times in total.
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:48 pm
Krupp says...



I'd like something looked at. It's the start of a novel I'm working on.

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Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:01 pm
AquaMarine says...



Sure, I've had a look at it but I have to go out so I have no time to review it fully. I'll come back on either later or tomorrow and do it. Sorry.
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:33 pm
Krupp says...



Don't worry about me; I'm not going anywhere.
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:27 pm
roon says...



:D Hey there! You don't have to, and if you do, you don't have to straight away, but can you review this:

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I'm unsure about the title...

~ Roon

EDIT: Just so you know, it's a poem :D
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Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:19 am
AquaMarine says...



Ok, Krupps is done! (sorry if it's not any good)
Onto roon's ...
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Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:27 am
AquaMarine says...



Roon's done. Amazing. Sorry I wasn't more help.

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Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:02 pm
Talulahbelle says...



Hello, I've never done this before so...sorry. Unfortunately I have no idea how to put a link in this here message, so... in Fantasy fiction, 'October'.
I completely understand if you don't review but I would greatly appreciate it if you did. I need all the help I can get. Thanks...
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Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:59 am
AquaMarine says...



I definitly will! Sorry, I am off to school in about half an hour and I need to get ready but I will do it when I come home!
Sorry!
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:46 pm
AquaMarine says...



Anyone? I don't bite ...
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Wed Oct 07, 2009 10:40 pm
jayleighsmith says...



Hey.
I'm new and not sure how to get the linky in the text box.
But I just posted "Breena" in the romantic fiction forum.
Could you tell me what you think?
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Thu Oct 08, 2009 1:38 am
empressoftheuniverse says...



Hello, I would like this looked at
viewtopic.php?t=53343
It's called scarecrow, and it's a smidget over 1500 words
Short story.
Thanks a ton!
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Thu Oct 08, 2009 5:29 am
AquaMarine says...



Sure! It's the morning right now so I have no time - but I'll do them both tonight!
~Amy
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Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:55 pm
AquaMarine says...



Done, by the way!
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Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:53 pm
LookUpThere says...



I would like a review.
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