hey if you have time, could you do the first three chapters of my novel? i've gotten only one review on chapter four and none on five, and it's been a while, so if reading them doesn't make you miserable, it would be nice if you could also do four and five. the links are here: topic73681.html topic73742.html topic73817.html viewtopic.php?t=73924 viewtopic.php?t=74024
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
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