Young Writers Society

Hello, and welcome to the mystical rose garden on the beautiful Orange Isle. Things are different about this place. Before you arrived, you saw signs bearning different colours, and they all vaguely farmilar words. Poetry, Photography. You look around the roses in the garden, and in the center likes a long strip of brown parchemnt. You take out, where you see the words, written in a jet-black ink. . .

What I review

Fantasy Fiction
Historical Fiction
Other Fiction
Action/Adventure Fiction
Science Fiction
Romantic Fiction

What I do not review

Lyrics
Non-Fiction
Photography/Art

You, curious, take your writing portfolio out of your backpack. Interested in the kind of feedback you might recieve, you contemplate whether you will accept the notes offer. You read on.


To Sumbit

Write down the title, the genre, and provide a link to your work. I will place your
query in my queue pile, which I hold in stacks of five at a time. When my stack is full, the others shall go into the waiting pile. I will eventually get to them; remember, paitence is a virtue.

Queue

1. pudin.junidf
2.
3.
4.
5


You smile, knowing you would love to recieve feedback. As you decide, you figure that you will spend some time to enjoy the wonders of the magical, mysterious garden. The roses are beautiful, the stones are of candy shades, and flowing waterfalls drip around the premise. What really catches your eye, however, is the stone shack on hill in the middle of the garden. You go inside. There is no furniture in the room, but there is a gold plaque that reads:


Completed


Stories

•Mission Zero Part 2 by Pretty Crazy.
•Red Vendetta 2.1 by pudin.junidf
•Red Vendetta 2.2 by pudin.junidf
•Child's Play Part One by empress of the universe

Poetry

•Heavenly Dark Dream by pudin.junidf


You turn away from the plaque, breathing a heavy sigh. This place is so magical...so mysterious...what will you decide?

Hi, Can you please tell me what you think about this:
topic52175.html?uid=13390
It's called 'Mission Zero part 2' and it's under action/adventure fiction. There is also a part one but I need some reviews for the second part.
Thank you.

Hey!! I'm Pudin, so I was wondering if you could review this poem for me. It's called Heavenly Dark Dream in Dramatic Poetry( I still need to work on the name)Here's the link.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=51856

And I was also wondering if you could review a chapter of the novel I'm working. The name is Red Vendetta (I still need to work on his one's name too. lol) It's in Other Fiction. This is a part of the second chapter.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=51580
YOu can read the first par if you want to.


Pudin

Bump

Hi!!
Pudin again. I'm a little apprehensive at doing this, asking you to review my job once again. NOt because, you don't do great, amazing reviews but because this part is a little...well, no comments than the other want. And because you had already reviewed two of my stories. (Thanks a lot!!)

So here it goes, it's the second part of the second chapter. You can review it only if you want to (you don't? **sniff**.) so here it is Red Vendetta (still working on the name)

viewtopic.php?t=52383

It's called a child's play part one; I would also appreciate it if you read part two but that's entirely up to you. The genre is other fiction; darker other fiction leaning more towards horror than anything else. You didn't state your thoughts on that; so I understand if you decline.


Part One
viewtopic.php?t=52420
Part Two
viewtopic.php?t=52460
Thanks so much for your consideration
~Meagan

HI Rose!!
Me here I again. BUt this time it's only a poem. I really hope you like it. I kind of worked hard on it.

So, here it goes. Oh, it's called, Tale of a Suicide.
post595259.html#p595259

If you can, and want, then you can review.

Thanks.
Pudin

oh, and by the way, thanks for the other ones.

Pudin

Hey, could you review this for me?

topic52519.html

Thanks!

~Sunny

Hi!!

HOw are you?

YOu can review this only if you want. its an extract from my novel (I have to admit, I like this part.) Here it is.

viewtopic.php?t=52724

BY the way, it's not the following chapter it's just a part of an upcoming chapter.

Thanks so much for your help.
Pudin

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