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Fri Jul 31, 2009 7:03 pm
octocoffee says...



roon's lovely poems have been reviewed :) -crosses it off the to-do list-
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:22 am
roon says...



Thank you so much, your review(s) was/were really helpful! I'm going to make improvements with the help of your suggestions! Erm, I know I'm a newbie and everything, but is there anything I can do in return?

~ Roon
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~ Jean Cocteau





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Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:40 pm
octocoffee says...



Actually, I'm a newbie too :) -high fives- Personally, just the fact that you said thank you made me feel all fluffy inside. If you ever need another review, just let me know :wink:
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:59 pm
Rascalover says...



Hello,
Can you please review chapter 11 of my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love You.

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The chapters before it consisted of the main character Isabella being in a car accident her boyfriend breaks up with her and she starts a relationship with her best friend and her ex-boyfriendsw cousin (same person). They go up to his cabin and have some fun, then she gets sick.


Pretty please review I give points :)

please and thank you,
Tiffany
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:13 pm
Young gun says...



Could you please review this work?I entered it for a contest.

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Too bad we don't live to experinece death





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Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:32 am
octocoffee says...



Alright, I'm all done! Next!
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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Wed Aug 26, 2009 11:56 am
afeefah says...



Hi,

Could you please review Chapter 4 of my story? You'll have to read the other chapters to get what's happening, and if you get bored or don't like the story, you don't have to review it. Jus PM me and let me know!

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Afeefah :D
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Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:15 pm
Carlito says...



Loved your last lyric review, so here's another one for ya. :)
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I want to beta read your novel!


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Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:13 pm
octocoffee says...



Reviews have been fulfilled. Next!
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:36 pm
afeefah says...



Hi again octocoffee!

Chapter 5 of my story is up! Please use the same link!

Thanks a lot!

Afeefah :smt004
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Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:54 pm
Lord Anzius says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post548273.html#p548273

Would you review this for me?
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:40 pm
Reida says...



Could you please review the first chapter of my book? I'm about to send it off and would like to have it critiqued before I do. I'd so appreciate it if you could.
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Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:45 am
octocoffee says...



Sorry guys, I've been super busy with volleyball! But I dont' have school tomorrow (thank goodness!) so I'll do my best to finish all three. I thank all of you for your patience.
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:51 am
afeefah says...



Hey again! :D

Chapter 6 please! Same link!

Afeefah :D
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:54 am
octocoffee says...



Just thought I'd let you guys know my greatest, greatest apologies, but I'm going on hiatus. I just have way too much going on right now, and sadly reviewing is not a big priority. I apologize so, so much, but I just can't do it right now. Good luck with your work, and if you still want me to review later on, just let me know.
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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