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Thu Nov 19, 2009 12:19 am
octocoffee says...



octo's back in business, ladies and gentlemen! Please leave a link and I'll get to you soon :D I'm finally free from the clutches of athletics hahaha.
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Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:02 am
Fruits_Basket99Tohru says...



Hi, could you please review my 1st story for me? Here's the link:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54552.html

It's under FanFiction, and you should be able to understand the story's basic meaning if you haven't heard of Super Smash Bros. Brawl. (SSBB)

Thank you so much! :D
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Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:57 pm
Fruits_Basket99Tohru says...



Thank you, Octo, so much! :) I just posted a new story; this time it's about Furuba! (Book 1 Chapter 1) Could you please review it for me? Please?

Here's the link: Furuba Book 1 Chapter 1 FanFiction

Hee, I love Fruits Basket! It would be really helpful if you reviewed for me. Thanks again. :D
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you."
--Fruits Basket Book 1, page 134

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Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:03 pm
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Yay~ One of my new year's resolutions is to review more, so...I hope to follow through on that! Plate's clear, anyone else?
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:44 pm
Lord Anzius says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=47319

Here is the second chapter of And There was Drum Roll.
I'd like your review for the second chapter too because I'm trying to make something of this story. Please review it :D thank you.
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
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Sat Jan 22, 2011 6:18 pm
octocoffee says...



My goodness, I haven't been around in ages! My apologies! I'm going to make an attempt to review at least one piece per week, since I've been so busy I don't think I could do more. I'm still rather rusty, but if anyone would like a review please let me know!
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Sat Jan 22, 2011 6:26 pm
Hecate says...



hey, would you like to review my prologue of my new novel? It's short, if slightly graphic.

topic75188.html

Thank you :)





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Sat Jan 22, 2011 7:32 pm
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Emmzziee says...



It'd be awesome if you could review my poem :D
viewtopic.php?t=75099
I've been getting quiet a few people to review this one, actually :) Xx
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:04 pm
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Alrighty, I reviewed Emmzziee's and stelagineva's works to the best of my ability :) I hope those worked out okay for you guys. Anyone else?
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 3:51 am
Flower~Child says...



I have a poem please? topic75292.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Sun Jan 30, 2011 2:38 am
octocoffee says...



I reviewed Flower~Child's lovely love poem :) Anyone else?
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:33 am
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Could you please take a look at this ?
I'd really appreciate it. Thanks! :)
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Fri Jun 23, 2023 2:38 am
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