roon's lovely poems have been reviewed -crosses it off the to-do list-
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury I Review Everything!
Thank you so much, your review(s) was/were really helpful! I'm going to make improvements with the help of your suggestions! Erm, I know I'm a newbie and everything, but is there anything I can do in return?
~ Roon
The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood.
Actually, I'm a newbie too -high fives- Personally, just the fact that you said thank you made me feel all fluffy inside. If you ever need another review, just let me know
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury I Review Everything!
The chapters before it consisted of the main character Isabella being in a car accident her boyfriend breaks up with her and she starts a relationship with her best friend and her ex-boyfriendsw cousin (same person). They go up to his cabin and have some fun, then she gets sick.
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please and thank you,
Tiffany
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury I Review Everything!
Could you please review Chapter 4 of my story? You'll have to read the other chapters to get what's happening, and if you get bored or don't like the story, you don't have to review it. Jus PM me and let me know!
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury I Review Everything!
Could you please review the first chapter of my book? I'm about to send it off and would like to have it critiqued before I do. I'd so appreciate it if you could. topic52431.html
Sorry guys, I've been super busy with volleyball! But I dont' have school tomorrow (thank goodness!) so I'll do my best to finish all three. I thank all of you for your patience.
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury I Review Everything!
Just thought I'd let you guys know my greatest, greatest apologies, but I'm going on hiatus. I just have way too much going on right now, and sadly reviewing is not a big priority. I apologize so, so much, but I just can't do it right now. Good luck with your work, and if you still want me to review later on, just let me know.
...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury I Review Everything!
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