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The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]



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Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:58 pm
TaylaChase says...



Could you please review this for me?

Reminiscence
Non-fiction

topic50718.html

Thanks!

~Tayla
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
~Albert Einstein

I'm not afraid of death, I just don't want to be there when it happens.
~Anonymous

I am the author of my life. Unfortunately I'm writing in pen and I can't erase my mistakes. . .
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 3:44 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Jetpack's review is complete ;)
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Mon Jul 13, 2009 11:43 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Magnus, your piece has been reviewed ;)
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:39 am
Angels-Symphony says...



moved

Will you please review this? It's for the 'Which Path to Take'
contest.

Dragon Tamer
Fantasy Fiction
G

topic50758.html

Thanks!

~Tayla
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I moved this for wrong thread reasons:P
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:26 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Tnme's, Gsp's, Pinkangel's, Dakota's, Rlw's, and Incognito's critiques are complete ^^

*throws out cupcakes*

Any more ;) ?
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:33 am
Searria H. says...



Hey! I really need help with part one and two of chapter one of "Through Hazel Eyes" posted under Adventure/Action Fiction.

Part one: topic43728.html

Part two: topic45104.html

"I neeeeeed hellllpppp Mrs. Paaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" - the babysitter from "The Incredibles" (can't remember her name.) I don't know if you've ever seen that movie, but that's what I feel like. I really need help!

Thanks bunches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Sea-
'Let's eat Grandma!' or, 'Let's eat, Grandma!' Punctuation saves lives.

Reviews? You know you want one. :)

*Ribbit*





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Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:13 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



I'm on it ^^
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:17 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Post some more guys ;)
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Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:56 pm
octocoffee says...



Would you mind reviewing mine? It's Historical Fiction.

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...if you are going to step on a live mine, make it your own. Be blown up, as it were, by your own delights and despairs. ~ Ray Bradbury
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Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:47 pm
Lil_Pau says...



Hey, angel-symphony! Could you review this piece for me? It's for Rosey Unicorn's "Which Path To Take" contest. It's the 2nd part, so you'll have to read the 1st part...:P

Title: The Grotto Of Grottos (part 2)
Genre: Fantasy fiction

Link: post581686.html#581686

Please and thanks! :D
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Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:29 am
Angels-Symphony says...



This is a reminder for myself.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51036.html

And I'm on it guys ^^
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:37 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Searria's and Tayla's are complete ^^

*Throws cupcakes*

Anyone else?
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:00 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Another reminder for myself:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50862.html
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:02 am
200397 says...



Hey, Shina! Can you review this for me?

Vindicated

It's Other Fiction, rated PG-13.

:D

~Sunny





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Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:25 am
Maki-Chan says...



I really need to have my story reviewed especially my newest chapters 3-5



topic50929.html



it's a fafiction about Silent Hill. You don't really need to know anything about it. I really just need my chapters reviewed ^_^
check out my deviantart account ^_^
http://maki121.deviantart.com/








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