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The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]



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Sat Jul 25, 2009 1:22 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Sorry about the delays guys. I'm only doing about 5 requests a week from my thread so I won't get carpal tunnel. I'm also trying to keep these reviews top quality. Just wanted to point that out so you all don't think I forgot you xD

-Shina
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Wed Jul 29, 2009 3:36 am
Socks-of-BLUE says...



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A Conspiracy by Socks-of-BLUE

tell me if you like it
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Thu Jul 30, 2009 11:25 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Shinaaa! Would you mind reviewing chapter two of one of my current series?

Unclaimed [2]. You'll have to read the prologue and the first chapter, but there's no need to review those if you don't want to ;)

Thanks!

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Sun Aug 02, 2009 10:03 pm
Tusker93 says...



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It's titled 'Meggido' and its under 'Other Fiction' though I suppose it leans towards the 'Fantasy' genre.

Take your time on reviewing it as I'm in no rush - Thanks again :).

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Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:22 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Octo's is done ^^
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Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:22 pm
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Gal's is done.
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:07 pm
KJ says...



Hi, Shina :) It's been a while since we've talked. I miss you! How are things going? I see you've been doing a whole lot of reviewing, but how's your writing? HAve time at all? I know school makes things so much mroe complicated :(

Anyway, I just posted something new that I would love to have your opinion on. It's very rough, mind you.

viewtopic.php?t=52735

If you find time to get to it, awesome. If not, nice to talk to you anyway! Later, Shina.

KJ





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Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:05 am
EmiAnne says...



Hey i was wondering if you could review my story "Loss, part I" because it's still very rough. It is under the Romantic fiction section and is rather new, so it should be in the first two pages. Thank you so much!





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Tue Sep 29, 2009 9:31 am
Mo. says...



Hey, I'd like you to *pretty please* review the first two chapters of my story.

They are currently entitled Sam (#1 and #2) and they really need reviewing.

Thanks heaps. xoxo Gen.


OK, well this is actually mo. but my sister wrote the message above, (meaning its her story and all, she was just on my account). :smt003
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Sat Dec 26, 2009 8:29 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Grand reopening ;) You know what that means.

-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Wed Dec 30, 2009 3:59 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Apparently, no one wants one of my reviews :P
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Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:42 am
Evi says...



Equipped with Melodies

For a contest, Shina, dear. ^^ It's in Other Poetry. If you have any alternative title suggestions as well, I would love to hear them. Thanks!
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Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:45 pm
OxfordandOnyx says...



Shina, if you would be so kind?

Poetry... http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56319.html.. The dramatic type.

Thank you :)
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Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:22 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Of course ^^ I'll start on them this afternoon after I finish that homework -.-"

-Shina
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The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:19 am
Young gun says...



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