Young Writers Society

*hammers sign up on the wall*

The Angel's Gallery

*walks behind the front desk and takes a seat*

Hey guys! Yup, Shina's back for business ^^ *taps purple nametag*

So please step inside, enjoy the free fireplace, help yourself to cookies and tea by the library, and hang your piece up on one of the walls for a review.

Feel free to put as many of your pieces up on my bare walls and expect a top-notch, professional review within the next week

Preference:
Poetry
Fantasy Fiction
Romantic Fiction
Other Fiction
Art/Photography
Non-Fiction
Lyrics
Action/Adventure Fiction
Historical Fiction
Other Fiction
Fan-Fiction/YWSF

Dislikes:
Rated R works

Anything I miss will be accepted.

To request a review, simply hang up a link, a title, and a genre.

Thank You
-Shina

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Would you mind doing this one? It's called The Golden Mirror and it's under fantasy. (:

Thanks for posting here, Tiger ^^

Your review is complete.

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flesh : part one.
Other Fiction
PG-13

^^; Thanks!

On it Wolf ^^ I can't believe I'm so late. I thought my thread disappeared xD

completed ^^

I've got a piece in need of a critique, if you have a moment.

Title: Green with Envy
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50640.html

Thank you!

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This one needs some serious work.

Can I ask for more than one at a time?
If not, just do the first and ignore the others, but I'll probably be back!

Please be as harsh as you want. Please tear them apart!

1. Title: Loving a friend
Genre: Lyrics
Link: topic50204.html

2. Title: The Night of Angels
Genre: Lyrics
Link: topic50570.html

Title: A story that I am writing that currently has no name Pt 1.
Genre: Action/Adventure Fiction.
Link: topic48480.html
It's rated PG-13. If you'd mind critiqing the other parts as well that would be appreciated. PM me if you need links to them as well.

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Could you review this? Go ahead and tear it apart if you wish.

Hi Shina,
I was wondering if you could check out my entry for the "Which Path to Take?" contest:)

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~Dakota

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50580.html
Title: Michael and Manson
Genre: Other fiction
I am trying to get as many reviews on this as possible. So if you have any time on your hands a review would be top notch, but if not it's all good thanks anyway.

Angel, would you mind taking a quick gander at my one story. I posted it, and I got no reviews for it. It was actually quite saddening.

In His Arms.

It is a collaboration of Science Fiction, Romance Fiction, and Other Fiction. ;3
Please and thank you!~

~Incognito

I'm on it guys ^^