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The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]



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Tue Jun 30, 2009 6:37 am
Angels-Symphony says...



*hammers sign up on the wall*

The Angel's Gallery

*walks behind the front desk and takes a seat*

Hey guys! Yup, Shina's back for business ^^ *taps purple nametag*

So please step inside, enjoy the free fireplace, help yourself to cookies and tea by the library, and hang your piece up on one of the walls for a review.

Feel free to put as many of your pieces up on my bare walls and expect a top-notch, professional review within the next week ;)

Preference:
Poetry
Fantasy Fiction
Romantic Fiction
Other Fiction
Art/Photography
Non-Fiction
Lyrics
Action/Adventure Fiction
Historical Fiction
Other Fiction
Fan-Fiction/YWSF

Dislikes:
Rated R works

Anything I miss will be accepted.

To request a review, simply hang up a link, a title, and a genre.

Thank You
-Shina
Last edited by Angels-Symphony on Sat Dec 26, 2009 8:28 am, edited 6 times in total.
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Tue Jun 30, 2009 6:58 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



topic50114.html

Would you mind doing this one? It's called The Golden Mirror and it's under fantasy. (:
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Tue Jun 30, 2009 3:57 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Thanks for posting here, Tiger ^^

Your review is complete.
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:31 pm
Wolf says...



topic50380.html
flesh : part one.
Other Fiction
PG-13

^^; Thanks! :)
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


Would you like a review?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html





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Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:11 am
Angels-Symphony says...



On it Wolf ^^ I can't believe I'm so late. I thought my thread disappeared xD
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:44 am
Angels-Symphony says...



completed ^^
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Sun Jul 12, 2009 9:50 am
Jetpack says...



I've got a piece in need of a critique, if you have a moment.

Title: Green with Envy
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50640.html

Thank you! :)





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Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:46 pm
MagnusBane says...



topic50661.html

This one needs some serious work.
“Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.” Anton Chekhov





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Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:50 pm
Carlito says...



Can I ask for more than one at a time?
If not, just do the first and ignore the others, but I'll probably be back! :)

Please be as harsh as you want. Please tear them apart!

1. Title: Loving a friend
Genre: Lyrics
Link: topic50204.html

2. Title: The Night of Angels
Genre: Lyrics
Link: topic50570.html
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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I want to beta read your novel!


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Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:29 pm
gsppcrocks10 says...



Title: A story that I am writing that currently has no name Pt 1.
Genre: Action/Adventure Fiction.
Link: topic48480.html
It's rated PG-13. If you'd mind critiqing the other parts as well that would be appreciated. :) PM me if you need links to them as well.
Just another quack spouting psychobabble.

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Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:35 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



topic50230.html

Could you review this? Go ahead and tear it apart if you wish.
Want a heavenly review?

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Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:02 pm
DakotaK says...



Hi Shina,
I was wondering if you could check out my entry for the "Which Path to Take?" contest:)

post579167.html#579167

~Dakota
What is important is to know fear and yet take a step forward.
Rosette Christopher

Looking for peeps to review my novel:)

novel.php?id=1142





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Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:19 pm
rlw92 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50580.html
Title: Michael and Manson
Genre: Other fiction
I am trying to get as many reviews on this as possible. So if you have any time on your hands a review would be top notch, but if not it's all good thanks anyway. :D





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Sun Jul 12, 2009 11:04 pm
Incognito says...



Angel, would you mind taking a quick gander at my one story. I posted it, and I got no reviews for it. It was actually quite saddening.

In His Arms.

It is a collaboration of Science Fiction, Romance Fiction, and Other Fiction. ;3
Please and thank you!~

~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Mon Jul 13, 2009 4:53 am
Angels-Symphony says...



I'm on it guys ^^
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.








A beautiful funeral doesn't guarantee Heaven.
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