z

Young Writers Society


The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]



User avatar
816 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44887
Reviews: 816
Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:08 am
Shearwater says...



Um, hi Shina!
I was wondering if you could review this one chapter for me :3
It's called Thorns & Roses, the fifth chapter.
post637162.html#p637162
Thanks so much!

~Pink
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham





User avatar
263 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 4362
Reviews: 263
Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:44 am
Angels-Symphony says...



I feel bad for being so late with these reviews :( One more our and my homework will be complete. After that, it's reviewing til' midnight!

-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





User avatar
263 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 4362
Reviews: 263
Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:38 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Evi- complete ;)
Onyx- done :D
Gun- Is there a way I can review your photo without the word document? I can't open those on my computer -.-"

-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





User avatar
126 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 15337
Reviews: 126
Sat Jan 02, 2010 8:42 am
PenNPaper says...



HI Shina, wondering if you could review this piece of work for me.
It's called Saving Zanica, it's under Science Fiction and it's rated E
topic56438.html
Writing is all about imagination~





User avatar
9 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 2610
Reviews: 9
Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:59 pm
superasian says...



hi shina!
i'd love your feedback/critcism on my WIP, Til Kingdom Come. i read your profile on inkpop and am so open for any 'harshness' you have to offer (;
post639369.html#p639369
i classify it as fantasy, but you could also call it science-fiction, i guess. it's post-apocalyptic.

xo julia
"we two alone will sing like birds in the cage… so we'll live, and pray, and sing, and tell old tales, and laugh at gilded butterflies"

wordpress | deviantart





User avatar
263 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 4362
Reviews: 263
Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:21 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Hey guys ^^ Just telling you I'll be a little slow for the next week due to exams, but I'm working on it ;)

-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





User avatar
130 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 24514
Reviews: 130
Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:09 pm
*coco says...



Hey Shina! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic. There are seven chapters so far, I know that's kinda long but I would really love to hear your take on the story. Here's the link for chapter 1:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html
Take as long as you need! x
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕





User avatar
1220 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 72525
Reviews: 1220
Fri Jan 22, 2010 2:15 am
Kale says...



Hey, Shina. When you have the time, could you review my Lyrics piece Fate (An Interpretation into English)?

Thanks.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR





User avatar
39 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 6337
Reviews: 39
Sat Jan 23, 2010 8:02 am
sugarxsnow says...



Hi Shina! I would like to have this reviewed:

Alice Who Lives Down the Rabbit Hole (Fantasy Fiction):

viewtopic.php?t=57528


Thank you very much! :D
"A fish bit my hand this morning, and everything became trippy. Now with this coke and this cherry, I can beautifully rule the world!"

-Dino, @ Dino and Cake's Adventures in La-La Land (Coming Soon)

PS: "Alice in Wonderland" obsessed? You bet.





User avatar
411 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 42428
Reviews: 411
Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:04 pm
BenFranks says...



Hey there!
Can you do me a favour and review this:

Earth And It's Contents: The Problem With It Is. (Extract from my book.)
topic57293.html


Can you give me some thoughts on the humour of this piece? Thanks a million!
Ben.





User avatar
21 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1378
Reviews: 21
Tue Dec 07, 2010 3:56 pm
Andie says...



Hi, can you review my poem, I really need help developing it. Thanks so much, you're doing a great job!

Title: I met a girl today
Genre: Dramatic poetry
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=72941
I never saw a wild thing sorry for itself. A small bird will drop frozen dead from a bough without ever having felt sorry for itself.
David Herbert Lawrence





User avatar
166 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 9676
Reviews: 166
Fri Jun 23, 2023 5:57 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE
Imagination is a superpower. Use it well!








Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
— Mark Strand