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Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:33 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



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I would be oh so very happy if you reviewed!
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:07 am
Carlito says...



D'accord Mme, :) J'ai fait ca.

Basically, that just means I did it :)
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Sat Jul 18, 2009 2:37 am
Carlito says...



I've still got a lot of free time to fill. :)
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Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:34 pm
wookielover17 says...



I'd be happy to help you fill up your free time. And besides, I could use some reviews. If it's okay with you. My story is:

Name: Learning the Truth
Genre: Other Fiction

Try not to be to harsh, if that's okay. Okay then. Bye!!!!
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Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:22 am
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Did you want me to review the whole thing or just a couple of chapters? Either way is fine, I don't really mind.

-Carly
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Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:59 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Hi! I'm looking for a review on this, it's the third chapter in a supernatural novel I'm working on called "The Love Note." I'm not really looking for any more input on the earlier chapters, but you may want to skim through them if you want to understand what's going on. Otherwise I won't mind if you just give me an overall nitpick of this chapter. Please feel free to be as harsh as you are able. :)

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Sun Jul 26, 2009 5:24 pm
Carlito says...



I did the first three chapters of your story Wookie, I'll do more if you want me to. :)

Jamie, I've read the first two chapters, your review is coming. :)

-Carly
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Sun Jul 26, 2009 5:49 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Hey Carly ^^ Shina here to request a review ;)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post585091.html#585091

It's called Cinnamon Rolls on Tuesday, Part I. It's an other fiction short story, but I'm going to repost it when it's all complete and whole.

Thanks ^^

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Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:58 pm
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Jamie, your review is done. :)
Shina, your review is coming. :)

-Carly
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Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:07 am
pinkangel54123 says...



Could you review Luna 2 if you are so inclined since you reviewed Luna 1 for me?
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Mon Aug 03, 2009 5:05 pm
Carlito says...



Shina yours is finally finished :)

pinkangel, yours is coming :)

-Carly
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Thu Aug 06, 2009 4:24 pm
Carlito says...



Finished your review pinkangel :)
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 5:43 pm
Pretty Crazy says...



Could you please do a review on my story? I want lots of different people to review it, so I can have lots of opinions. :)
It's called "Mission Zero"
And it's under action/adventure fiction.
Let me know if you like it.
Thanks. ^_^
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Sun Aug 23, 2009 4:30 pm
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Finished Pretty Crazy :D

((OMG! 1000 posts!!! :elephant: (I've never used that one before but it seems like a good time to start) :) ))
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:15 am
Carlito says...



I've still got free time to kill even though school has started. *bangs head into wall* :D
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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