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Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:16 am
Elinor says...



Here, if you could please review Into the Depths Chapter II, please?

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Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:56 pm
Carlito says...



Finished Rose!

Sorry it took so long. Someone thought it'd be a great idea to take a bunch of AP classes this year. :)


I'm still excepting reviews though!

-Carly
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Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:13 am
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Hey, I know you said you won't review fantasy, but you said you'd review something of mine since i entered the contest. I'd really love you to review Wrath of A Grecian Moon, by me, and it has a pretty deep love sub-plot line. But if you want me to choose another I will! :)
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Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:32 pm
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Finished Silversun :)
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Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:56 pm
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Review my prologue please? :)

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Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:50 pm
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Finished Smiley :D
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Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:41 pm
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:19 pm
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Please review my first chapter of my novel. I;m sending it off this week and would love to get it perfect. I'd so appreciate it if you could find the time.
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Mon Sep 21, 2009 11:27 am
Khe Sahn says...



Hey, would you be able to possibly review my item? It would be really appreciated. I know you said you don't know much about poems because it wasn't one of the specified topics, but I'm sure you'll be able to. Well here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=53118
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Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:49 am
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Finished Anzius and Reida! :D

Khe Sahn, I'll try to do yours tomorrow.
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Thu Sep 24, 2009 2:00 am
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Fini Khe Sahn! :D
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Thu Sep 24, 2009 2:04 am
pudin.junidf says...



Hey!!

Well, this is a poem actually, so I understand if you don't want to read it.
It's called Nothing Compares to you"

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Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Sun Sep 27, 2009 3:42 pm
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Finished pudin :D
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Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:08 am
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Hello, I was wondering if you could review my short story Principle Mackenzie.
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It's rated a mild R, if that matters. For language and themes(?)
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Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:37 pm
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Sorry for the wait, but it's done now! :D
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