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Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:42 pm
Carlito says...



The wait won't be long now. The term is over and I'm on break! :D
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:18 am
Rascalover says...



Romantic fiction: Let Me Love You

this is chapter 12

Brief description of what has happened before: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.

link: topic54963.html

Please review thanks,
Tiffany
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Sat Nov 28, 2009 1:58 am
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Finished! :D
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:19 am
anima9 says...



Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2!

A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
topic55391.html

I will be grateful to your generous and kind efforts.
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Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:07 am
Rebz :) says...



To Be Confirmed...
Please! And I also need a title (a proper one) so any ideas for that would be much appriciated. Thank you!
Some Angels Are Destined To Fall.
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Thu Sep 30, 2010 1:20 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey there, Carlito(adorable name, by the way).

So I want a review and you might be able to help me out, I guess. So here's the link and try to be harsh. But only to the extent my heart could bear. :lol:

Link: The Road Not Taken-Chapter-1

Thanks in advance!
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Thu Sep 30, 2010 8:56 pm
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Finished Caligraphy's from the other thread that needs to be locked.

Rebz and Shubhi I'll get to you asap! :)
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Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:44 pm
Carlito says...



Done with both of yours!

Who is next? :)
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Mon Oct 11, 2010 2:47 am
Rascalover says...



Hey,
You review chapter 12 of my romantic novel Let Me Love You
The synopsis then was: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.


Well Now I have chapter 20 up and it is the ending. What has happened to this point is that you tol gary she was pregnant adn they found out they were going to be parents to twins, but one of the twins has a heart problem and they don't know if she will make it.

Here is the link: post771854.html#p771854

Please review it :)
Thanks and have a good day,
Tiffany
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Tue Oct 12, 2010 8:21 pm
Carlito says...



Done!
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Wed Oct 13, 2010 1:31 am
Flower~Child says...



I have a poem. topic70588.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Wed Oct 13, 2010 1:39 pm
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All done :)
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:44 am
writerwithacause says...



Hello, Carlito! :) I have a new romantic short story (kind of like a letter that is not expected to be read): topic76229.html

It would be great to get some reviews on it! Take your time.
And thank you in advance!
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