Young Writers Society

So, I think I may be stealing your life here, but you help me so so much, so please look at Night Walker?

Let me know if you want a critique in return. I can check out your NaPoWriMo thread, or something else if you have anything more current. I definitely owe you though, lol.

<3

~JFW1415

would you do one of mine? Only if you want to- I have three, you could do any one of them Thankyou!

Wow, okay, I think I've been away for...way too long. Ahem. I'm trying to review more (again) though, so if you post here I'll try to get to it sooner or later!

If it's not too much trouble, I'll be requesting two.

The Birth of Magic - This is for Rosey's contest, so if you only review one, I'd rather it be this one. The contest ends on the 25th, so if you could get to it quickly... XD

Orpheus - This is perhaps my most favorite poem to date, and I just revised it yesterday, so anything you could point out that would make it better would be appreciated. :D

There you go, Kyllorac - both done! I finally figured out how to subscribe to a thread, so that should help XD

Check the "Notifications" thing at the top. Gives you a notification for when your Will Review thread has been replied to.

Also!This poem of mine is lacking reviews. If you would be so kind as to review, I would appreciate it.

Haha thanks, I just found that. But subscribing sends an email as well, which gives me no excuse to be lazy, so. Also! Your review is done!

Hey! Could you review a pome, please? It's, like, a million years old and needs work, so...

The Mad Psychiatrist

Did I even spell that right?

Um, this is a short story. But it's only about 1k and I think you'll like it. topic65767.html Thanks, Bubble.

~peanut~

Some poetic experimentation here:

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Enjoy,

Hey there. Mind reviewing this poem for me? Please do tear it apart, it's at the bare bones right now and I'm wondering if it's got any potential.

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Will you review this? topic68412.html

Hi! Here's a poem for you to review!! topic68408.html

Thanks,

~Rain~

Hi!
Could you please review this poem: Piano Playing Days?
Thank you!