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Mon Mar 16, 2009 3:33 am
peanutgallery007 says...



Welcome!

What I will Review

I will review any genre, except novels/ novellas. I'm not great at scripts or photography but I will try my best.

How to Reply

Please copy/ paste this to your reply and fill it in please! :) I won't demand it, but it's nice if you would.

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Type of piece (poem, fiction, etc.);

Rating (if there is one);


Feel free to ask for focus on something specific that others may have neglected (flow, grammar, word choice, etc) if you want, but this is not required for you to do.

I guarantee that I will review your requested piece within 48 hours. If you want it sooner, just say so and I would be glad to help you within the requested time frame.
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Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:42 am
imapoemperson says...



here i know you have already read it but i still need a review
topic45336.html
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Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:28 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Hi Peanut! Nice to see you again ^^
I was wondering if you would review my NaPo's thread?
Here's the link: topic46629.html

Thanks!
*Kat*
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Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:27 am
asxz says...



Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

Thank you so much!
::XoX::KeepWriting::XoX::

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Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:28 pm
peanutgallery007 says...



Done with all those! Keep 'em comin'! :P
Have a peanut =)

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Sun Apr 19, 2009 1:05 am
Eliza:) says...



Title or link: The End of the World

Type of piece: Fiction

Rating: PG

Thanks in advance. :)
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 1:50 am
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Done with that, Eliza! P.S. I loved it! Nice writing style... :P

Keep 'em comin' :D !
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 10:54 pm
peanutgallery007 says...



Don't be shy! Step on up! :D
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Tue Apr 21, 2009 11:47 pm
ColeHeart says...



Hello! Could you review my story? :)

Title or link: topic47062.html
Type of piece: Fantasy
Rating: PG (For violance.)

thanks! <3~
  





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Tue Apr 28, 2009 6:01 pm
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All finished!

Keep 'em comin' ;)
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Sat May 02, 2009 6:12 am
Meep(: says...



I still need improvements on my story,
Your help would be much appreciated :D

Thanks! :D
~Meep(:

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Sat May 02, 2009 7:32 am
peanutgallery007 says...



You are an absolutely amazing writer Meep. The true stories are almost always the best. I did as well as I could with your story :) . It made it hard to critique, because all I wanted to do was read it. Just read it. Like I said in the review, give my best wishes to your great- grandfather.

I didn't get your title until I read it. Letters isn't as in a-b-c-d-e-f-g... that's what I thought you meant.

Very original, dear. Absolutely fantastic.
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Wed May 06, 2009 1:11 am
peanutgallery007 says...



Anyone else?

Your review
is my to- do!

Don't be shy,
step up for a try!

It's all free,
so come ask me!

Please don't worry,
I'll get it done in a hurry.
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Tue May 12, 2009 9:15 pm
rustic_rebel says...



Hey!
I would love it if you told me what you thought of a entry I've wrote for a contest.
Link is http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47988.html
It's pg-13 I think it is not bad,
And it's fantasy
Thank you SO much
Keira!!
  





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Wed May 13, 2009 3:54 am
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All done! ;)

Neeeeext! :twisted:
Have a peanut =)

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