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Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:26 am
eddykins says...



Could you please look at Moonlight for me? It's of the Other Fiction category. Thank you so much and congrats on the feature. <3
  





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Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:50 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Could you please review this for me? It's the third chapter of a supernatural novel I'm working on. You don't need to review the first two, though if you want this to make more sense you may want to at least skim through them. Otherwise I'm just looking for what you think about my writing style, and nitpicks, and characters and such. Thanks in advance.

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Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:12 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



If you don't mind, I'd like a review ;)


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You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.
  





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Fri Jun 26, 2009 7:49 pm
Chloe(: says...



Could you review this please?

Thanks!
Formerly known as Vivacious.

Full of Cliches:a challenge to see who can write a piece with the most cliches.
  





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Tue Jun 30, 2009 4:25 pm
Evi says...



Alright, everyone, sorry for any wait. ^_^ Everything in line is now completed.
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
  





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Thu Jul 02, 2009 1:12 am
Antigone Cadmus says...



Meeeep. Hi, Evi darling.:)

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For Rosey's contest. It's simply horrid... but I wanted to add some gloom to her happy theme.
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
-Catullus, Carmen 85
  





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Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:06 pm
Wolf says...



Hey, congrats on the feature! What with all these reviews you've been doing, you definitely deserve it. :)

... and you'd deserve it even more if you reviewed the following: topic50380.html! *evil laughter* It's PG-13 in Other Fiction.

Thanks! *hugs&

- Camille.<3
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


Would you like a review?
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Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:18 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



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Pick this one! Pick this one!
(Action/Adventure)
Want a heavenly review?

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Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:35 pm
DakotaK says...



Hey Evi!
I was hoping you could check out my "Which Path to Take?" contest entry. It's Fantasy Fiction (I'm not sure if you read Fantasy, if not you can delete my post), PG and called Wyndolyn. I wanted to get some reviews on it to spiff it up some before the contest (on the 15th). I hope you don't die of boredom reading it LOL.
~Dakota

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Rosette Christopher

Looking for peeps to review my novel:)

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Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:44 am
Lil_Pau says...



Hi Evi!

Can you please review my story here? It's in the fantasy fiction forum.
It's for a contest, so I just want a review so that if there are faults, I can edit them before the contest deadline.

The link:
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Please and thanks! :D
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Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:10 am
Evi says...



Camp's over! =D So, my thread can now resurrect from the depths of this forum and proceed to better the literary world with constructive criticism and insightful input!

In other words: bump. :wink:
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
  





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Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:58 am
Rosendorn says...



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"Ever After" in fantasy.

Shred please!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:45 am
Rosendorn says...



Ever After [2] is up!

Thanks Evi!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Wed Aug 26, 2009 2:04 am
Evi says...



So, new site, eh? ^_^ Step up now and become my first review on the new-and-improved YWS! :P
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Wed Aug 26, 2009 2:13 am
Elinor says...



Hey Evi!

If you don't mind:

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(Into the Depths: Chapter I in Action / Adventure)

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

-- Walt Disney
  








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