Young Writers Society

Hey. I'm Evi. ^^ Welcome to my humble establishment.

The cool part:

I will review the following:


Any Fiction (except for fanfiction, though, please!)
Any Poetry


All I need is a link, the genre, and I'm good! If you aren't satisfied with the review you receive, feel free to PM me and we can talk about your work some more.

Name: Stairs <-- Just click on the title.
Genre: Other Fiction (Horror)


Ok, so I'm a little hesitant about asking you to read this. I'm pretty sure you can handle it, but it might be a little creepy...I don't know. If you don't want to review it, that's totally fine. I'll just post something else for you to shred!

Also, leave out that you're a "new-ish member". For some reason, people are often unsure if they want new members to review their stuff. Go figure. *shrug*

Done, anti-pop! Pshh. I totally handled it.

Keep them coming, people!

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

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Ta, Maki-Chan, 'tis finished. However, you might not want to post in nineteen different 'Review for Food' threads. Six or seven at the very most. Then reviews tend to lose meaning, as a lot of things will be repeated, ya?

And it slightly irks me. Just a bit.

Anyhoo, you're completed. Anyone else? I'm hoping to reach 100 reviews by the end of February!

Nineteen? Whoa. Nice. That's gotta be a record. xD

Evi, I have nothing to post here, but I was wondering if you could just choose a random poem of mine to review?
I would love to know which one you like best.


~anti-pop

Done.

* sigh *

Aunty Pop, your poem was just so lovely. And congrats, you're my prime customer! .

No line. Not that there ever is, anyways.

Slumberland
Other Fiction
1,200 words. Very short!

Thanks SO much for the review on my poem. I really appreciate it, Evi! It was a great review!

EDIT:
Actually, I'm going to rewrite that completely. You can review this draft if you want, but it's not my final one so...it's all up to you! Sorry!


~anti-pop

Alright, Pop, I'll just wait until I get that PM when you've finsihed the re-write and then I'll proceed to critique.

In the meantime, I'm still open for business.

Dear, would you mind reviewing this? It's in need of a lot of work, I'm afraid, but I just don't know what to do with it.

Daniel
Other Fiction
Link

Gracias!

Wonderfully original, Mars! You're all done!

*hums*

Hi! Could you please review my works? I would like to know what you think. I understand if this takes you a long time! Help needed!


This is me book called split personalities (I really need a new name!)
Prologue
Chapter 1 Part 1
Chapter 1 Part 2
Chapter 2 Part 1
Chapter 2 Part 2
Chapter 3 (only one part)
Genre: Action/Adventure Fiction

Could you please focus on the believability of the piece?

Alright, asxz, I'll get right on it! However, I think you're right; that might not be quite finished within three days. I'll try though. Really.

EDIT: Seems I've already done the Prologue. I'll start with chapter one, then.

Huh, Lol, Thanks!

Mind reviewing this, Evi?
The Childhood of Mr. O'Connor
Other Fiction

Thank you so much! ^^


~anti-pop