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Wed Aug 26, 2009 10:56 pm
Evi says...



Done, no line! ^_^
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
  





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Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:24 am
imapoemperson says...



Here's the first chapter of Struck Sightless...you reviewed the prologue.

topic52513.html
"We played Pin the Tail on the Reason My Life Feels So Insufficient, and nobody won." -Megan Moriarty
  





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Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:16 am
Evi says...



*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
  





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Thu Sep 24, 2009 1:24 am
pudin.junidf says...



HI Evi!!
I was wondering if you could review this poem. It's called Nothing Can Compare To You.
topic53241.html

Thanks so much for your help
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

Verlaine
  





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Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:03 am
empressoftheuniverse says...



Hello Evi, I was wondering if you could critique my short story called
Principle Mackenzie
viewtopic.php?t=53552
Its a smidget under 1500 words.
Oh, and comma abuse will be present. So don't bother pointing it out because, well, I know it's there.
THANK YOU for the super-helpful and wonderfully awesome review!! You rock.
Naked I came from my mother's womb, and naked I will depart.
*Le Bible
Royal Reviews Here!
  





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Sun Nov 08, 2009 5:47 am
xLogan says...



Here ya' go - topic54258.html. Sorry if it's suck-ish. :lol:
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

[•_•]
robot fayce
  





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Mon Nov 09, 2009 11:57 pm
xLogan says...



Awesome, could you review it again? topic54258.html
I updated it! Should be better. :)
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

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Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:26 pm
xLogan says...



Lol, well, I wrote a new story. Could use another review. Sorry if I'm overhauling you.

topic54389.html
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

[•_•]
robot fayce
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2009 1:04 am
imapoemperson says...



Can you review this if you have time?
topic54518.html

Thanks!
~Poem
"We played Pin the Tail on the Reason My Life Feels So Insufficient, and nobody won." -Megan Moriarty
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2009 11:54 pm
Young gun says...



viewtopic.php?t=53642

thanks.
Too bad we don't live to experinece death
  





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Mon Nov 16, 2009 1:53 am
d@ydre@mer27 says...



Hello there, if you have time you think you could review the first chapter in my novel?
I'd really appreciate it :)

-d@ydre@mer27

topic54520.html
"A black cat crossing your path signifies that the animal is going somewhere." ~courtesy of one of history's funniest men, Groucho Marx. ^_^
  





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Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:46 am
xLogan says...



Back to Square One (2) - the second part of my story, topic54556.html

Here is the first part just incase you need to refresh, topic54389.html
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

[•_•]
robot fayce
  





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Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:03 am
imapoemperson says...



Here's the second part to Road Narrows,

topic54702.html

Thanks :D
~Poem
"We played Pin the Tail on the Reason My Life Feels So Insufficient, and nobody won." -Megan Moriarty
  





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Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:17 pm
Explosive_Pen says...



Evi Jeebs!
I'd like a review on my poem please? post624755.html#p624755
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."
  





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Thu Dec 31, 2009 6:43 pm
Evi says...



Okay, people. Anyone in need of a review?
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
  








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