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Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:44 pm
KailaMarie says...



I want to get my review count up!

I'll review pretty much anything, but just a warning, my reviews for poetry won't be very good because I'm not really used to poetry. I will give you my opinion on it, though.

Just gimme a link and tell me how rough you want me to be. Also, tell me if you want me to nit pick because sometimes I worry if that annoys people, but I can if you want me to. (:
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:51 pm
RGallagher says...



Ohh I'm first! Can you review this for me?

Title: Top Secret
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: topic42021.html

Be as rough as you can! I'm open to all suggestions. Thanks!
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 11:08 pm
Night Mistress says...



Title; Coruage
genre: Other fiction
Link: topic42066.html
Summary: a rape victim finals finds peace from her nightmare when she falls in love with a single dad and his teenager.
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

~Elizzabeth Grey of Addicting Posion





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Thu Jan 29, 2009 1:16 pm
KailaMarie says...



RGallagher, done!

Edit: Ok, I finished both of them. Good job guys! Hope I helped. Any questions just PM me.

So anyone else??
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 9:48 pm
Chloe(: says...



Please review this one!
topic42563.html
Genre: Fantasy-Romance
I've gotten ONE small review on this one, so please, please review!
Formerly known as Vivacious.

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Sat Jan 31, 2009 3:39 pm
KailaMarie says...



Ok! I'm done with that, too. Anyone else? I want things to review!! :D
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 2:06 am
Winter's Twelfth Night says...



Hi! I'm Winter. If you don't mind, I'd like your opinion on these two:

Title: Emma Hereford, Prologue
Genre: Historical Fiction
Link: topic43076.html

Title: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Genre: Historical Fiction
Link: post485656.html#485656

Be as harsh and critical as you want! I would love your thoughts on the plot so far, as well as character development and all that. if you find any grammatical or spelling mistakes please let me know.
Thank you so much! Your reviews are greatly appreciated.
-Winter
Mamillius: Merry or sad shall’t be?
Hermione: As merry as you will.
Mamillius: A sad tale’s best for winter. I have one
Of sprites and goblins.

The Winter's Tale





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Thu Feb 05, 2009 10:03 pm
KailaMarie says...



I did the first one and I'll do the second when I get more time.
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:05 am
Maki-Chan says...



How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!
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Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:23 am
KailaMarie says...



Sorry this has taken a while, but I'll get to those soon. I did the second one for Winter's Twelfth Night.
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Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:36 pm
KailaMarie says...



Ok, I finished all of them! Any more? (:
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Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:29 pm
velvetnight1313 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43988.html
"She walks in Beauty, like the night,Of cloudless limes and starry skies;And all that's best of dark and bright, Meet in her aspect and her eyes:Thus mellowed to that tender light, Which Heaven to gaudy day denies." -George Gordon Lord Byron





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Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:02 am
PhoenixBishop says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43949.html

Although it says fourth chapter it is not necessary to read the fist three because their in a different charters perspective. Be as cut throat as you want.
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:35 pm
MySunshine says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43503.html

I appreciate any kind of feedback, so be as thorough as you want ;)
Thank you so much!!
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