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Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:42 pm
Mars says...

Carly, Shina, Vivacious, I know this is ridiculous but SOON I promise. I've just been really overwhelmed this past month and gah. This week, I'll do them, I swear. Everyone else is finito.

Oh, and guys: please only request one review at a time - you can come back, but wait until I've finished your first request before asking for another. If you request more than one I'll just do your first and ignore the others. It's in the first post...
'life tastes sweeter when it's wrapped in poetry'
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Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:58 pm
Carlito says...

Crap, I didn't see that...
I edited mine so it's only one thing :)

Thanks much again! :D
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I want to read your work!

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Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:47 am
break~my~heart says...

hi :)

could you maybe review this piece for me?

it's um, viewtopic.php?t=52267


Alone- alone- all- all- alone
Upon the wide, wide sea-
And God will not take pity on
My soul in agony!
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Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:32 am
GoldenQuill says...

Mars! <3 My first critiquer. :}

Here's my first chapter of Limitless. I'd love it if you reviewed it. ^.^

EDIT: The first chapter has been reviewed tirelessly. You can still look at it, but I'd really like it better if you reviewed my third chapter which could be found here. (Well, that's the first part, at least.)
Last edited by GoldenQuill on Tue Mar 09, 2010 3:39 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Feb 24, 2010 5:28 am
KanenRenoir says...

I've redrafted my story and was wondering if you could check it out. Here's a link to the first part, but if you can, I was wondering if you'd also check out the second.

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Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:08 am
MilkNCookies says...

pretty pretty PLEASE review minza dragon story!

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Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:02 am
SilentRain says...


Please reveiw this poem for me, topic69987.html


topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Fri Feb 04, 2011 4:32 am
RayneBow says...

review my poem, The Last Dance? (:
(youll have to get the link off of my featured.. my computer will not let me copy and paste. D,:)
please, and much thanks!. :)


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