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Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:48 am
asxz says...



Hi, You reviewed my prolgue before, But I totally re-woked it, and now it has more stuff in it. Link here!
Thank you!
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Tue Feb 24, 2009 8:38 pm
lilymoore says...



I would really appreciate it if you could review my newest piece. Its pretty short. hehe. Anyway, thank you. :D

topic44186.html
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:22 pm
MySunshine says...



Could you review my prologue? That'd be awesome :D
Thanks in advance!

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Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:52 pm
Mars says...



Galerius, lilymoore, asxz, and MySunshine - I'll get to them this weekend. I promise.
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Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:11 am
Mars says...



*revives*
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Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:32 pm
Dahlia says...



Hey, Mars, I'd love some help on this. Thank you if you get around to it!
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:56 am
Bloo says...



Yes can I get a review please with extra fries and an Ice tea, for this.

topic44924.html

I would be very thankful. So thanks in advance if you review it.
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Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:06 pm
Mars says...



Guyyyyyyssss. I'm bored. Gimme something. :)
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Wed Mar 18, 2009 2:22 am
MidnightVampire says...



Alright, here's something for you: post528324.html#528324

But, just a warning, it has gay romance in it, so if you don't want to critique it because of that, then that's okay. I wasn't sure...so its rated R, I hope you don't mind!
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 11:57 am
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*pokes*
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Mon Apr 27, 2009 10:16 pm
Lord Anzius says...



Please review:

Terrafertilis prologue
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post549635.html#549635
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Tue May 05, 2009 4:21 pm
CK Lynn says...



Hello :)

Please review
post552875.html#552875

Thank you!
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Thu May 07, 2009 5:21 pm
mizz-iceberg says...



Heya Mars!
Could please review a short story I wrote? It's rather rusty and unpolished. I'd like an in depth review.
The link: topic47744.html

Thank you very much!
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Sat May 09, 2009 1:49 pm
Mars says...



Done and done! :D
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Sun May 10, 2009 5:51 pm
Kamas says...



Hi Mars!
Will you review my poems?
I am using them as an english project and I need you to rip them to threads!
Thanks lots!

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