Young Writers Society

Hi guys. Keep requesting reviews, but I have exams next week, so I won't be able to get to them until after January 15. So, I will do them, but after Thursday.

Demeter and Night Mistress, I'll try and get yours done ASAP.

xxxxx

Post Script: Okay, those two are taken care of-but now, it's studying...and writing...time.

Post post script: Exams postponed! Give me MORE.

I have a lyric...a sort of a love song. Here it is. topic41463.html
thanks!
Cheers.
--Vox

Any more? I'm not busy this week, so I'll be able to get to them quickly.

Ahhh, there are more of these amazing boards?! Followed your featured story from your profile, and here I am, about to request for you to take on my baby. She's a lovely little baby, just starting out, but a tad long even so. I'd love to take whatever you can give on her and turn it into more lovely writing. Keep in mind, she's hoping to turn into a book! Even a series, if I'm able to manage. Comment about anything; the names of towns, dialogue! Everything. ;=; I'm serious. I love reviewing works, but I also desire some of my own to be reviewed.

That said, will you let me know if you ever need anything reviewed. I try to be thorough by default, but if you need some hard-hitting editing and reviewing, I love doing that too.

<_< After my long-winded introduction, here's the link!

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THANK YOU in advance, though I will surely thank you after the fact as well! ^_^

Would you mind critiquing one (or both) of the poems that I have links to in my siggy?

*bribes with a cookie*

Hello Marssss

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A little narrative poetry for you. Enjoy!


*anti-pop

Bump!

I'm not sure if you are still doing reviews but if you are I'd love for you to take a look at my latest story.

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As always I will return the favor, just let me know which piece of yours you want critiqued the most and I will do! Oh and I'd really appreciate it if you tore it to shreds, I am not easily offended and I don't really like reviews where people are like: Oh it totally rocks! Yeah You!

Thanks a bunch!!!!!

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

Sorry! I'm rewriting my story. I'll let you know when it's finished.
My bad!


~anti-pop

Hello I am here to enquire about your reviews. I am desperate for reviews my many friends don't critique them anymore (since my personal activity on the site has drastically dropped) so now I must come to this forum. so could you please review this story?

The mansion
other fiction
no idea how many words

So sorry, Maki-Chan and Lord Anzius. I've totally been slacking. If your reviews aren't done by tomorrow, you can stab me or something.

Hello! Since you did such a Glorious job reviewing my last chapter I was wondering if you could take at the new chapters that I've posted. I've been kind of busy writing, so whenever you have time I'd much appreciate your input! Thanks!

Chapter Two Part One
Chapter Two Part Two
Chapter Three Part One
Chapter Three Part Two
Chapter Four

Please review my historical fiction story if you have free time!

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Please review my lyric poem, Pleading to a Wet Sun, when you can.

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Be harsh. Thank you!