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Sun May 30, 2010 5:43 pm
canislupis says...



Hey Rascalover!

Yours in done. Hope I helped at least a little. :)

Come on, people, I need more!
  





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Sun May 30, 2010 6:30 pm
canislupis says...



Done, classy! I really liked your story.

Anyone else?
  





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Sun May 30, 2010 11:44 pm
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LauraElizabeth says...



Do you think you could review the first two chapters of my fantasy novel? The link is in my signature. Thank you :)
  





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Mon May 31, 2010 12:26 am
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Title: The Specters of Verity and Angelica Flink
Genre: Fantasy
What you'd like me to look at: Everything if you have the time, it's pretty brief
Link to page: topic64414.html (also in my signature)
Know what I would love? A review!
topic64587.html
  





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Mon May 31, 2010 2:03 am
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canislupis says...



Silversharpie--Done! Hope I helped. :)

Laura--Read it, but not had time to post the review yet. You should see it soon, though.

Attolia--Sorry this is taking so long. XD The third one should appear shortly.

Anyone else? I can take up to two more, I think! :)

Lupis
  





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Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:59 pm
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canislupis says...



And... Done! I am now only nine reviews away from my goal!
  





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Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:24 pm
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canislupis says...



*Bumpity bump bump bump*

I know, I'm shameless. But come on people! I'm only three reviews away from another star! I could do that today!
  





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Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:36 pm
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austenite says...



No need to be shameless, I'm a lover of reviews, so if you could kindly review Part One of The Fall, my latest work here topic64749.html . Gratefulness, hugs, and possibly a gift after much sucking up will be given!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
Oscar Wilde
  





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Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:21 pm
canislupis says...



Done! Thanks for asking me--I loved your story. I am now only two reviews away from my goal!

Anyone else?
  





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Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:53 am
canislupis says...



Hello!

I have reached my goal. But, since I achieved it in less than half my time goal, and still have fiteen days left, my new goal is 470.

Request away!
  





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Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:22 am
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Attolia says...



Hey canislupis,

Thank you again for all the reviews.

I really did not think I'd have chapter three up this fast, but here it is
topic64924.html

I'd love it if you could give it another review!

Thank you tons,

Attolia :D
well you'll work harder
with a gun in your back!
for a bowl of rice a day
  





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Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:58 pm
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canislupis says...



theboss--Done!

Attolia--Sure thing! I'll get to it as soon as possible.

Lupis
  





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Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:01 am
canislupis says...



And, done! As usual, that was an absolute pleasure to read. :)

Anyone else?

Lupis
  








Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
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