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Mon Apr 22, 2013 1:48 am
Rosendorn says...



Done.

Next?
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 5:59 pm
emilyleigh says...



Hi there! Could you please take a look at this short story I wrote? It's a first draft and I like the bones of it, but know it needs some work! So some feedback would be greatly appreciated:) It's called "Summerfest":
work.php?id=101028
  





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Thu Apr 25, 2013 1:28 am
VampireSenshi says...



When you have time :D

work.php?id=101167
<YWS>
<NE1>

NIGHT is always watching...
  





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Fri Apr 26, 2013 1:58 am
lilcanich says...



when you get the chance

work.php?id=101031
  





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Fri Apr 26, 2013 6:45 pm
elcuidador says...



work.php?id=100545
Or
work.php?id=101186

Here's two poems for ya xD enjoy and thanks.
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Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:16 am
Aley says...



If you totally want some meat to eat, you can check out these. They need some thinning. I'll put up the options and you pick what you think looks tasty~

work.php?id=99324
work.php?id=100940
work.php?id=100011

-cough-

If nothing looks appetizing, you can always go back to Audy. I won't be hurt a'tall.
  





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Mon Apr 29, 2013 1:41 am
Rosendorn says...



Everybody but Gravy and Aley are done. You're up next.

Keep 'em coming.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Tue Apr 30, 2013 1:40 am
Carina says...



Hey, Rosey! Could you give me some feedback on a short story of mine and tell me what you think?

work.php?id=101138

Thanks! I highly appreciate it. :]
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Thu May 09, 2013 9:01 pm
screamandshout says...



Would you review my poem for me? Please and thank you!

work.php?id=101373
  





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Thu May 23, 2013 4:37 pm
Tabithalillian says...



I'd love a review of the first chapter of a novel i'm working on! Thank you!

work.php?id=101581
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Thu May 23, 2013 11:01 pm
Ray112 says...



Hi! I posted this a little while ago. Could you review it for me? :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101564
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Wed May 29, 2013 5:45 am
HostofHorus says...



Rosey! My favorite reviewer! Could I trouble you to read this for me? :) Your skills would be greatly appreciated!

work.php?id=101674
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Fri May 31, 2013 3:27 am
Iggy says...



Hello, dear! Would you be so kind as to review this for me? :)

I'd super appreciate it and if there's any story you like me to review, I'd be honored to do so!

Here's a gift as thanks. ;)

Click here.
Last edited by Iggy on Mon Jun 17, 2013 6:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri May 31, 2013 4:04 pm
gauravkundu32 says...



Would you please review this work FEAR [new chapter 4]
Last edited by gauravkundu32 on Mon Jun 24, 2013 3:49 am, edited 2 times in total.
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