Hi Demeter. You think you could look this over for me? It's a romance, and I'm attempting to write a novel. I want to know how I did on the first part. You don't have to if you don't, but I'd appreciate it!
I've got a poem that I'd like reviewed, particularly your opinion as to whether or not it's worthy of being entered in a writing contest in which I will be competing against highschoolers.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
My name is Ashley. I found this poem among my things. It's from a few years ago. I don't remember when or why I wrote it, but I'm quite impressed with it myself and I would love your feedback on it.
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