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You Know You Want Some [re-opened]



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Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:21 am
UrbanNomad says...



Hello there reviewer!
Can you please help me out viewtopic.php?t=88518
Any advice will go a long way on my poem
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Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:29 pm
joshuapaul says...



[url=http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic89134.html]Damn yes, I want some.[URL]
Read my latest
  





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Sun Dec 04, 2011 2:55 pm
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Jalmoc says...



Hi Demeter. :D You think you could look this over for me? :) It's a romance, and I'm attempting to write a novel. I want to know how I did on the first part. You don't have to if you don't, but I'd appreciate it!

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If you don't take a chance, you'll always live your life in regret, so let your heart show it's true colors and admit your feelings!

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Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:25 pm
Demeter says...



Re-opened! Please read the first post before requesting :)
"Your jokes are scarier than your earrings." -Twit

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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:29 pm
Shady says...



Hey Demeter!

I've got a poem that I'd like reviewed, particularly your opinion as to whether or not it's worthy of being entered in a writing contest in which I will be competing against highschoolers.

work.php?id=98548

Thanks a ton!

~Shady 8)

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Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:48 am
ShakespeareWallah says...



Hey Demeter,

Could you review this short -story for me? It's called:Plastic

Thanks!
  





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Fri Jan 11, 2013 11:42 pm
*coco says...



Hey, coco here!

I've recently started a new novel and I would love to get some good reviews, if that's okay!

Take as long as you need :)

Title: Dark Lies
Genre: Mystery/suspense
Link: work.php?id=98967#comments

Thank you!
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:26 pm
PurpleMoment says...



My name is Ashley. I found this poem among my things. It's from a few years ago. I don't remember when or why I wrote it, but I'm quite impressed with it myself and I would love your feedback on it.

work.php?id=99293
  





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Sat Feb 02, 2013 4:56 pm
Lumi says...



c'mon, demzy, you know you want to ;D
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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