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Sun May 24, 2009 7:58 pm
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afeefah says...



Hi. Could you please review this for me?

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Thanks! :D
  





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Mon May 25, 2009 10:40 pm
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Rascalover says...



All done, nice piece :)

Anyone up and running for a speedy review????
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Wed May 27, 2009 8:09 pm
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Rascalover says...



Do I have to beg??? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed May 27, 2009 8:54 pm
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Sins says...



Hey x
Could you please review my poem, I'll give you a virtual ice cream!
Thanks !

Meg xoxo

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Fri May 29, 2009 12:04 am
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Rascalover says...



Thanks for the request good poem

Any one else needin' a review ??????????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat May 30, 2009 12:49 pm
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Sins says...



Thanks for the review! :D It was really helpful :)
I know you've just reviewed my poem but could you please review my fiction if that's possible :)
If not, don't worry :wink:
Thanks in advance

Meg xoxo

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Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:32 am
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Rascalover says...



All done :)


Any one out there needing a review???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:33 am
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Rascalover says...



ya know ya need one :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:27 pm
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Rascalover says...



bump*
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Sun Jun 07, 2009 4:59 am
borntoshop says...



Link...topic47579.html

Very much appreciated!

Not sure if link will pop up but it's on my profile, Love Hurts!
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Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:59 am
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Rascalover says...



Thanks for the request. All done

Whos up next??

Pretty please you know you want one :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Jun 11, 2009 4:30 am
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Rascalover says...



*bump* anyone need a review?????????????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat Jun 13, 2009 3:21 am
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Bickazer says...



Errr, if you don't mind long things...could you take a look at "The End of Time" chapters one and two? Chapter one already has a good many in-depth reviews, but I really need reviews for chapter two so feel free to skim through chapter one if you want to (so far the two chapters aren't really that connected, either).

Chapter one: topic48651.html

Chapter two (part 1): topic49181.html

Thanking you very much in advance. I know it's long, so that's why I'll return reviews if you finish with it. :)
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Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:16 pm
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Plus-One says...



Ooh I have a strange piece that needs critiquing before I can enter it into a contest...I'm a bit unsure of it myself, so critique would be very nice! :)

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Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:52 am
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Jamie_rocks says...



Could you please review this for me? It's the third chapter of a supernatural novel I'm working on. You don't need to review the first two, though if you want this to make more sense you may want to at least skim through them. Otherwise I'm just looking for what you think about my writing style, and nitpicks, and characters and such. Thanks in advance.

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