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Mon Jan 25, 2016 4:53 pm
Carlito says...



To open it, you have to edit the first post. There should be a drop down tab near the title of the thread and you should be able to select open or closed.

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Tue Jan 26, 2016 3:16 am
Rascalover says...



Awesome! Thanks!
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Sat Jan 30, 2016 5:03 am
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Hi Rascalover, Felistia here. :D
I would really love it if you could review my poem Autumns Tale. It is a realistic\mystery poem.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Autumns-Tale-125389
Thanks for your time. :D
  





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Sat Jan 30, 2016 8:57 pm
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felistia wrote:Hi Rascalover, Felistia here. :D
I would really love it if you could review my poem Autumns Tale. It is a realistic\mystery poem.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Autumns-Tale-125389
Thanks for your time. :D



All finished! Who's next?
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 11:13 pm
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Anyone need a review? :)
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:44 am
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Hope and Me
please mate i need as many as possible on this one and its poetry
  





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Fri Feb 05, 2016 12:56 am
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themanofstars wrote:https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/themanofstars/Hope-and-Me-126959
please mate i need as many as possible on this one and its poetry


Finished :)
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Fri Feb 05, 2016 1:05 am
felistia says...



Hi, me again. :D
Could you please review I am Water.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/I-am-Water-127001

Thanks for your time. :D
  





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Fri Feb 05, 2016 6:06 pm
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felistia wrote:Hi, me again. :D
Could you please review I am Water.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/I-am-Water-127001

Thanks for your time. :D

Finished :) Thanks!

Next up?
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Fri Feb 05, 2016 7:32 pm
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Hmm... would you be against reviewing semi-realistic fiction for a baby writer?

It's got your standard magic and monsters from Fantasy but is set on Earth (society itself is at the equivalent of the 1500s, technology-wise) and I try to keep things as grounded as I can.

Here's the link, if it interests you: War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

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Sun Feb 07, 2016 11:20 pm
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Costa wrote:Hmm... would you be against reviewing semi-realistic fiction for a baby writer?

It's got your standard magic and monsters from Fantasy but is set on Earth (society itself is at the equivalent of the 1500s, technology-wise) and I try to keep things as grounded as I can.

Here's the link, if it interests you: War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

Whatever the answer, thanks for your time!



Finished! Thanks for the request!

Anyone else?! :D
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Tue Jun 07, 2016 12:37 pm
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Hi, Felistia here again. :D

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic. :D
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. The first ten or so have a lot of review's on them so you don't have to review those ones. I really need reviews on the later chapters. :D
This is just the first link. I have quite a few chapters, so I didn't include the links or it might take up an entire page. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Quest-for-Fire-Book-One--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-124445
Thanks for your time
It's okay if you want to turn it down because of the fantasy thing. I won't get offended and you did say that you don't really like fantasy. I just wanted to ask. :D
Have a great day\night.
  





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Fri Jun 10, 2016 6:42 pm
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Can you please review the first chapter to my novel 'River Dreams'?

River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

Thank you!
  





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Mon Jul 11, 2016 6:49 pm
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felistia wrote:Hi, Felistia here again. :D

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic. :D
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. The first ten or so have a lot of review's on them so you don't have to review those ones. I really need reviews on the later chapters. :D
This is just the first link. I have quite a few chapters, so I didn't include the links or it might take up an entire page. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Quest-for-Fire-Book-One--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-124445
Thanks for your time
It's okay if you want to turn it down because of the fantasy thing. I won't get offended and you did say that you don't really like fantasy. I just wanted to ask. :D
Have a great day\night.

Hi!!!! I'm so sorry this is so late! I never got a notification that someone posted in this thread! I will work on this eventually I promise!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Jul 11, 2016 6:50 pm
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artbyandream wrote:Can you please review the first chapter to my novel 'River Dreams'?

River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

Thank you!


Thanks for your request!! I will get to this as soon as possible!
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