felistia wrote:Hi Rascalover, Felistia here. I would really love it if you could review my poem Autumns Tale. It is a realistic\mystery poem. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Autumns-Tale-125389Thanks for your time.
themanofstars wrote:https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/themanofstars/Hope-and-Me-126959please mate i need as many as possible on this one and its poetry
felistia wrote:Hi, me again. Could you please review I am Water. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/I-am-Water-127001Thanks for your time.
Costa wrote:Hmm... would you be against reviewing semi-realistic fiction for a baby writer?It's got your standard magic and monsters from Fantasy but is set on Earth (society itself is at the equivalent of the 1500s, technology-wise) and I try to keep things as grounded as I can. Here's the link, if it interests you: War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1Whatever the answer, thanks for your time!
felistia wrote:Hi, Felistia here again. I would really like you to review my novel please.It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic. I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. The first ten or so have a lot of review's on them so you don't have to review those ones. I really need reviews on the later chapters. This is just the first link. I have quite a few chapters, so I didn't include the links or it might take up an entire page. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Quest-for-Fire-Book-One--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-124445Thanks for your timeIt's okay if you want to turn it down because of the fantasy thing. I won't get offended and you did say that you don't really like fantasy. I just wanted to ask. Have a great day\night.
artbyandream wrote:Can you please review the first chapter to my novel 'River Dreams'?River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carriesThank you!
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