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Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:29 pm
STobsessed says...



topic90467.html Can you review my short story? Please and thank you.
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Sat Nov 19, 2011 10:18 pm
Rascalover says...



all done, who's next? :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:23 pm
peanutgallery007 says...



Why hello there ^_^

It'd be fantastic if you'd review my poem for me. Something's wrong with it but I don't know what.

Thanks in advance :)
Have a peanut =)

Try your hand at my poetry contest!

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Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:57 pm
Rascalover says...



It wont let me click on your link for your poem :( Send another and I will definitely look at it.

For now who else needs a review?! :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:19 am
Jas says...



viewtopic.php?f=365&t=87281

It's newly edited. Thanks! :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:05 am
Nike says...



can you review: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 26&t=92647

Thanks!

Nike (:
“The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don’t always soften the bad things, but vice versa the bad things don’t always spoil the good things and make them unimportant.” - Eleven

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Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:36 am
Rascalover says...



all done :D

Who needs a review next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Sun Jan 15, 2012 2:39 pm
Benrobertringrose says...



Hello!

Would love a review on this:

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92344

Thanks in advance :)
  





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Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:02 am
Rascalover says...



Your welcome!

Who else needs a review?

Stack 'em up!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:12 pm
ShootingStars says...



Will you please review this novel? Thanks! :D
viewtopic.php?f=365&t=92610

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Sat Jan 21, 2012 7:00 am
Rascalover says...



All done!

Who else would like a review?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:02 am
Rika says...



Hello,
I am new to YWS. The atmosphere around here is very inspiring. I couldn't stop myself from posting my work. I have written an article On Euthanasia;it's pros and cons under the General Articles category of the non-fiction section. I would be immensely grateful If you put forward your views about it. I would appreciate criticism as well! thank you! :) I have given the link below -
viewtopic.php?f=388&t=92734
  





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Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:41 pm
scifyfantacywriter01 says...



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Hey, I'm scify. this is my new thing i've been working on. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks
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Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:34 am
fiction903 says...



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Hey I'm Fiction. I would really appreciate if you could review my poem. Thank you so much.
  





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Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:30 am
Rascalover says...



All done! Who's in need of a review next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  








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