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Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:25 pm
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Rascalover says...



Maki-Chan wrote:well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know is that "Silent Hill" is a town that people's worst fears take shape.

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If you need to know what is happening Beth is looking for her missing sister. Right now she is currently in Silent Hill, with Sera. Sera is a really nice person who wants to help Beth, however Beth hates Sera.

prologue- Beth has a dream that her sister disappears, and it comes true

ch1- 4 years later Beth (18 years old) thinks about the past, and how no one really looked for her sister (Alex). Sera makes her appearance. Its highschool graduation day, and Beth leaves her hometown (Ashfield) and heads to Silent hill to find her sister. (Since she got a note in Alex's handwriting saying "Silent Hill").

ch2- Beth's car brakes down, and she has a strange dream. After she wakes up, Beth hitchhikes, and surprisingly Sera appears and offers her a ride. When they are driving Beth falls asleep, and has a nightmare.

ch3- topic40923.html

please review it *Begs*


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Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:26 pm
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Rascalover says...



Any one else need a review???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:42 am
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Ducati says...



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Please and Thankyou :)
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Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:31 am
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Rascalover says...



Did your review hoped it was helpful, loved the story!

anyone else???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 11:57 pm
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Rascalover says...



???

Boredom here......
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Jan 20, 2009 3:56 pm
BigBadBear says...



I could use some help with this?

Please and thank you so very much!

-Jared
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:02 pm
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Rascalover says...



i posted your review I hope it was helpful! :)

Anyone else????
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:24 pm
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Jon says...



www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42369.html
It's Realistic Fiction, I would really appreciate it! (only 900 or so words.)


Thankyou!


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Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:40 pm
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Rascalover says...



I got your review done i hope it was helpful!

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Fri Jan 23, 2009 3:39 am
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RGallagher says...



Hey! Can you review this short story for me?

Title: The Elves are Coming
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post492214.html
Word count: Around 615
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Fri Jan 23, 2009 9:14 pm
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Rascalover says...



It needs a bit revision but i enjoyed it, good work! your review is done!

Anyone else?
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Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:11 pm
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Jon says...



*Cough*
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Poem, everyone seems to like it... Please! *Feels guilty*


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Sat Jan 24, 2009 3:10 am
Rascalover says...



BRAVO! awesome work! All done with your review

So whos next?
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:57 am
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Rascalover says...



Does no one need a REVIEW?

:cry: pretty please wet me review something?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:02 am
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Rascalover says...



Do I need to beg? ahah come on guys!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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