Thanks for the review! It was really helpful
I know you've just reviewed my poem but could you please review my fiction if that's possible
If not, don't worry
Thanks in advance
Errr, if you don't mind long things...could you take a look at "The End of Time" chapters one and two? Chapter one already has a good many in-depth reviews, but I really need reviews for chapter two so feel free to skim through chapter one if you want to (so far the two chapters aren't really that connected, either).
Could you please review this for me? It's the third chapter of a supernatural novel I'm working on. You don't need to review the first two, though if you want this to make more sense you may want to at least skim through them. Otherwise I'm just looking for what you think about my writing style, and nitpicks, and characters and such. Thanks in advance.
"The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth." — Kate Chopin, The Awakening
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