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Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:01 am

Angels-Symphony says...

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Thank you^^

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Mon Feb 02, 2009 2:24 am

Rascalover says...

All done hope they were helpful

Any more????
please

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Mon Feb 02, 2009 3:52 am

MidnightVampire says...

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Its narative poetry, I hope you don't mind. Be as harsh as you find needed.
Thanks!
~MidnightVampire
P.S. if you could think of a name (possibly) I would be grateful.

I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time.

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Tue Feb 03, 2009 1:53 am

Rascalover says...

Done awesome poem!

Any one else please?

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Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:00 pm

Rascalover says...

bump

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Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:39 pm

silverSUNLIGHTx says...

How about this?
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topic43266.html

Thank you! :]

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Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:12 am

Maki-Chan says...

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

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Mon May 04, 2009 2:44 pm

Rascalover says...

silverSUNLIGHTx wrote:How about this?
topic43179.html
topic43266.html

Thank you! :]

Im so sorry but it just didn't keep me interested and instead of skipping to the end and giving you a bad review thta wouldn't be helpful i didn't review your work i am so sorry

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Mon May 04, 2009 3:11 pm

Rascalover says...

Maki-Chan wrote:How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

Your review is done I hope it was helpful.

Anyone else need a review????

I am back and running at full speed

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Thu May 07, 2009 12:55 am

Rascalover says...

Bump*

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Sun May 10, 2009 5:58 pm

Kamas says...

Me!!
I'm next!!
Try to review at least two of these four poems will ya?
(Thank you so much!)

K A M A S

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Thu May 14, 2009 10:53 pm

Rascalover says...

All of your reviews are done I hope they were helpful

Whos up next?
Come on keep them coming

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Sat May 16, 2009 10:06 pm

Ermixon says...

Please review this

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Thu May 21, 2009 7:51 pm

Rascalover says...

Your review is finished

very interesting story line

Any one else need a review????????????????????

Whos up next?

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Sat May 23, 2009 4:29 pm

Rascalover says...

You know you want one

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