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Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:00 pm
Emmzziee says...



Could you review this, please? :)
viewtopic.php?t=88535
It'sa little poem xD
And if there's anything that you'd like a review on, too, I'd be sure to check it out :D
Thank you,
Emmzziee
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Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:59 pm
Rascalover says...



All done; who's next? :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:01 am
MSDavies says...



A review would be fantastic.


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=89296
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 11:05 pm
SilentRain says...



Hi :) I was wondering if you could review either of this two poems

viewtopic.php?t=89201 <<This one is The Suns Betrayal

viewtopic.php?t=89197 << This one ia A Life Through Sad Eyes

I would be very thankful if you ould review one of these, I have had two reviews on them both but would like another opinon on them, just to get more then one veiw point.

~Rain
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:05 pm
Sianniiee says...



Hello there,
I'm new to YWS and would like a review on my first submitted piece of writing.
It's called "Catching fear" and it's song lyrics.

I would appreciate it if you reviewed it.
Thank you
Sianniiee
Siaanniiee;D
  





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Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:12 am
Fizz says...



I would really appreciate a review of basically anything I've written, but most recently I posted this

Love Me

It would love to be reviewed! I would love for it to be reviewed. I think it needs help, particularly the opening. So please pull it to pieces!

Danke!
  





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Fri Nov 04, 2011 9:16 pm
Rascalover says...



MrSherrington's the only one I have left to do.

Keep them coming guys! :D
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Fri Nov 04, 2011 9:30 pm
MrSherrington says...



Thankyou for your time! I am at your disposal for reviews or slaying Internet Beasts such as the Forum Troll, Nihingr The Lagg Serpent, The Everlasting Flame War Kings, The Forum-Eater and even the humble "n00b"
  





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Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:41 pm
Rascalover says...



All done.
Who needs a review? :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Nov 07, 2011 3:05 pm
TylynRae says...



I wrote a short story yesterday, and its a tad explicit but I was wondering if you might take a look at it? If so, thank you =]
topic89963.html
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Wed Nov 09, 2011 3:34 am
Rascalover says...



All done.

Who needs a review? :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:19 pm
Rascalover says...



Anyone? Calling all who need a review! Get one here, for free! Two for ones and everything! Check it out!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Nov 15, 2011 7:24 am
jackle says...



My novel, The Prevailing Darkness, would like a reveiw :wink: (novel.php?id=1132) A review on any of the chapters would be fine, but currently chapter three and six have no reviews, sooo yeah :)
Please and thank you :D
check it out - novel.php?id=1132
  





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Wed Nov 16, 2011 3:07 am
Rascalover says...



All done, who would like a review... business has been slow so now time offer two-for-one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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