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Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:01 am
Angels-Symphony says...



topic42305.html
topic42847.html
topic42854.html

Thank you^^
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Mon Feb 02, 2009 2:24 am
Rascalover says...



All done hope they were helpful

Any more????
please :)
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Mon Feb 02, 2009 3:52 am
MidnightVampire says...



topic42652.html

Its narative poetry, I hope you don't mind. Be as harsh as you find needed.
Thanks!
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P.S. if you could think of a name (possibly) I would be grateful.
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 1:53 am
Rascalover says...



Done awesome poem! :)

Any one else please?
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:00 pm
Rascalover says...



bump
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:39 pm
silverSUNLIGHTx says...



How about this?
topic43179.html
topic43266.html

Thank you! :]
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:12 am
Maki-Chan says...



How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!
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Mon May 04, 2009 2:44 pm
Rascalover says...



silverSUNLIGHTx wrote:How about this?
topic43179.html
topic43266.html

Thank you! :]


Im so sorry but it just didn't keep me interested and instead of skipping to the end and giving you a bad review thta wouldn't be helpful i didn't review your work i am so sorry :)
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Mon May 04, 2009 3:11 pm
Rascalover says...



Maki-Chan wrote:How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!


Your review is done I hope it was helpful.

Anyone else need a review????

I am back and running at full speed :)
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Thu May 07, 2009 12:55 am
Rascalover says...



Bump*

Any one need a review????
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Sun May 10, 2009 5:58 pm
Kamas says...



Me!!
I'm next!!
Try to review at least two of these four poems will ya?
(Thank you so much!)

K A M A S :D

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43385.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42799.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46613.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44468.html
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Thu May 14, 2009 10:53 pm
Rascalover says...



All of your reviews are done I hope they were helpful :)

Whos up next?
Come on keep them coming :)
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Sat May 16, 2009 10:06 pm
Ermixon says...



Please review this

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Thu May 21, 2009 7:51 pm
Rascalover says...



Your review is finished :) very interesting story line


Any one else need a review????????????????????

Whos up next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat May 23, 2009 4:29 pm
Rascalover says...



You know you want one :)
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