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Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:13 am
STobsessed says...



post884571.html#p884571 Could you review this for me? Please and thank you
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Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:42 am
Rascalover says...



All finished. Who needs a review?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:18 pm
cannoncomplex says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic84133.html

Could you review that story for me its for a contest due next week, and i'm not sure if its all polish up yet. I don't mind you being hard on the story. Aside from the grammar, can you comment on the plot, style and the characters involve in this.

Thanks, and I'll review one of your pieces as return :)
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Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:03 am
Rascalover says...



All done, Who needs a review?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:58 am
Rascalover says...



Anyone?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Jul 19, 2011 9:11 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hey Rascal!!
Could you review this story for me?
Broken Pieces.Prologue
Is the prologue of a novel I'm working on right now.
Is under Romantic Novels.

Thanks in advance :D
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Fri Jul 22, 2011 5:57 am
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empressoftheuniverse says...



Hey, I was wondering if you could read my poem Lust
I feel like it needs a lot of work, especially since right now it's a weird cross between prose and poetry and I'm not exactly sure what it is.
Thanks so much in advance.
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Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:02 am
KatTrain says...



topic84744.html

Please and Thankyou:)
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Sun Jul 24, 2011 2:28 pm
DrunkOnWriting says...



Hello, I would love it if you could take a look at my novel:) Thanks so much!
  





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Mon Jul 25, 2011 2:49 am
Rascalover says...



I just got sick, but I will def. take a look at your request tomorrow :(
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Aug 02, 2011 4:05 am
Rascalover says...



All done.

Who else needs a review?! :smt003
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Fri Aug 05, 2011 1:39 am
Ultimateanon says...



Hello, I would love for you to write an review for the first chapter of my book: topic85422.html#p895266
The book is an Fantasy (I'm a fantasy freak).
Thanks! ^^
  





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Fri Aug 05, 2011 2:07 am
Daisuki says...



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Review, please? Thank you very much, I really appreciate it!
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Sat Aug 06, 2011 9:16 pm
azntwinz2 says...



Hi!
Could you please look at this for me?
topic85468.html

And if you can, maybe the second chapter? Thanks!
Please make sure to check out my portfolio! Any comments are immensely desired!
  





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Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:56 am
DevanEWilliams says...



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Please and thank you!
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