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Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:09 am
Rascalover says...



I havent been on this website in forever but im back full swing so does anyone need a review for the holidays :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:09 am
Rascalover says...



*bump*

Anyone need a review???????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:29 pm
*coco says...



Hey, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I know it's quite long but I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. Here are the links:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html (chapter 1)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53746.html (chapter 2)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53800.html (chapter 3)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53888.html (chapter 4)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54024.html (chapter 5)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54589.html (chapter 6)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic55095.html (chapter 7)

Thanks so much!
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Sat Jan 23, 2010 3:34 am
Rascalover says...



I have reviewed your pieces :) hope I was helpful enough.


So who is next????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:50 am
Rascalover says...



Anyone ???

Do I need to beg??? :elephant:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Jan 26, 2010 5:14 am
AspiringAuthorA..M. says...



*Raises hand, and waves it like a madman* Me, me! But, first do you also review on the advanced critiques section? :?

You know, where entire novels are placed? :P
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 9:49 pm
Rascalover says...



Yes I do :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:37 am
Rascalover says...



working on your review, but others are still welcomed and encouraged pretty please will you ask for a review from me???????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:28 am
Jennafina says...



Me please? You're so sweet! You sound so desperate to help other people. :D

The only thing is that I've rated my story, Dancers in the Dark, 18+. There's some drug use and the main character says a swear word. It's probably nothing you haven't seen on TV, but if you didn't want to review this I'd totally understand.

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Either way, thanks a lot. You're awesome.
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Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:27 am
Rascalover says...



Allllll done :)
and thanks

Anyone else need a review???? :elephant:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Feb 01, 2010 11:19 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hi Rascal!
Could you please review this?
It's under Lyric Poetry and it's called Little Missy
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Thu Feb 04, 2010 3:52 am
Rascalover says...



All done :)

Anyone else????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat Feb 06, 2010 8:16 pm
Stori says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58360.html

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Tue Feb 09, 2010 1:16 am
Rascalover says...



very interesting hope i was helpful

whos next :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:25 pm
Rascalover says...



Bump*
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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